Spring Sting

In early showers of spring
Fields ripen as willows throw a gentle ring
Snakes witness to ravens beaming stealth
Hearty gossip thrills are wilderness with wealth
We play in small remote ponds of mud 
Dance and run into the sun
Can you feel its blushing sting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 12:38 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 12:06 AM
Hey, Adam, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 1:39 AM
Adam, Enjoyed reading your poem. **SKAT**
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