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Spring So Soon?

.     Folks flee Florida.
      Searing Spring sunshine sizzles.
      Traffic tapers then.

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Audrey Haick

January 31, 2010 at 11:16 AM

Good luck in the contest, Robert. This is perfect! Peace, Audrey

Kim Hilliker

January 31, 2010 at 12:26 AM

Clever write about the traffic lightening up in the Spring. Good luck in the contest.

Connie Marcum Wong

January 30, 2010 at 7:32 PM

Robert, We have our high seasons here in Hawaii too, so I can relate. Good haiku....Aloha, Connie

Carolyn Devonshire

January 30, 2010 at 5:28 PM

People who live in Florida year round almost dread spring because of the traffic problems. Still, it's now also viewed as a much needed boost to our tourism-based economy. There's a lot of truth in this great haiku, Robert. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

January 30, 2010 at 4:42 PM

They are all sun-bathing on the sizzling sand!! Watch out for those bikini clad ladies!!! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 30, 2010 at 4:25 PM

Luv this Haiku in Alliteration form .. Robert.. and thankxxx for sharing this piece which I hope u entered in the contest by Carol Brown... good luck if so... I appreciate all your wonderful comments and uplifting encouragement always but especially during these past few days.. wonderful to have great friends like u... blessings.. luv... Linda-Marie..