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Spring So Soon?

. Folks flee Florida. Searing Spring sunshine sizzles. Traffic tapers then.

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Audrey Haick

Date: 1/31/2010 11:16:00 AM

Good luck in the contest, Robert. This is perfect! Peace, Audrey

Kim Hilliker

Date: 1/31/2010 12:26:00 AM

Clever write about the traffic lightening up in the Spring. Good luck in the contest.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/30/2010 7:32:00 PM

Robert, We have our high seasons here in Hawaii too, so I can relate. Good haiku....Aloha, Connie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/30/2010 5:28:00 PM

People who live in Florida year round almost dread spring because of the traffic problems. Still, it's now also viewed as a much needed boost to our tourism-based economy. There's a lot of truth in this great haiku, Robert. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/30/2010 4:42:00 PM

They are all sun-bathing on the sizzling sand!! Watch out for those bikini clad ladies!!! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2010 4:25:00 PM

Luv this Haiku in Alliteration form .. Robert.. and thankxxx for sharing this piece which I hope u entered in the contest by Carol Brown... good luck if so... I appreciate all your wonderful comments and uplifting encouragement always but especially during these past few days.. wonderful to have great friends like u... blessings.. luv... Linda-Marie..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2010 4:19:00 PM

AWESOME reason to wait for spring!!! I like this and if it's for the contest, I bet you could do well with it! Let me go see my soup mail now! andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2010 3:48:00 PM

Great Spring Haiku. Are the migrating birds fleeing also. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 1/30/2010 3:20:00 PM

We love Spring eh Robert!