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Spring Smorgasbord

the blue-gray rabbit
steals green and orange veggies 
springing up and down

3/1/2019
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Sara Kendrick

March 7, 2019 at 5:07 PM

I have read your Haiku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

March 7, 2019 at 7:16 PM

Thank you, Sara!

Andrea Dietrich

March 3, 2019 at 2:40 PM

I really liked this springy one. Back with Congrats.

Kim Rodrigues

March 3, 2019 at 8:27 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Paul Marc

March 3, 2019 at 12:54 PM

Beautiful haiku “springing up and down”. Love it!

Kim Rodrigues

March 3, 2019 at 8:26 PM

Thank you, P.M.!

Jan Allison

March 3, 2019 at 12:30 PM

what a cute poem Kim! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

March 3, 2019 at 8:26 PM

Thank you, Jan!

Charles Messina

March 3, 2019 at 7:45 AM

Love this one, Kim. Congratulations on your win... Charlie :)

Kim Rodrigues

March 3, 2019 at 8:26 PM

Thank you, Charles!

Alexis Y.

March 3, 2019 at 7:36 AM

Hi Kim, Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-)Alexis

Kim Rodrigues

March 3, 2019 at 8:25 PM

Thank you, Alexis!

Charlie Knowlton

March 3, 2019 at 7:25 AM

Congrats Kim! Hoppity Hop!

Kim Rodrigues

March 3, 2019 at 8:25 PM

Too funny, Charlie! Thank you :)

Line Gauthier

March 3, 2019 at 7:19 AM

Congrats on your win, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues

March 3, 2019 at 8:25 PM

Thank you, Line!

Charlie Smith

March 3, 2019 at 6:52 AM

Congratulations thank Kim...

Kim Rodrigues

March 3, 2019 at 8:24 PM

Thank you, Charlie!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 3, 2019 at 6:32 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely Spring Haiku, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

March 3, 2019 at 8:24 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! :) Kim

Tom Cunningham

March 3, 2019 at 6:06 AM

Lovely haiku Kim, congrats. Tom.

Kim Rodrigues

March 3, 2019 at 8:24 PM

Thank you, Tom!

Tania Kitchin

March 3, 2019 at 5:44 AM

A sweet haiku with fun imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!

Kim Rodrigues

March 3, 2019 at 6:01 AM

Thank you, Tania! Enjoying your contests! :)

Andrea Dietrich

March 2, 2019 at 7:36 PM

cute title and cute poem!

Kim Rodrigues

March 2, 2019 at 10:03 PM

Thank you, sweet friend!

Silent One

March 2, 2019 at 11:57 AM

Nice imagery Kim..

Kim Rodrigues

March 2, 2019 at 3:56 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Swetha Vangaveti

March 2, 2019 at 9:44 AM

Aww!!! The cutest one :)

Kim Rodrigues

March 2, 2019 at 3:56 PM

Thank you, Swetha!

Sara Kendrick

March 2, 2019 at 7:19 AM

Ahh!!! So cute. I enjoyed the humor but it is not so cute when deer or rabbits really eat up one's garden. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

March 2, 2019 at 8:20 AM

And they must stay out of the strawberries! Thank you, Sara!