Spring Smiles--Haiku











          spring, swirling sweet scents.
          startling sun, sudden showers.
          soft starling, so stunned.

           
    
                           3/28/2021
                              ~1~

                        Alliterative Haiku
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Cunningham Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 4:46 PM
Well written Pangie, you've created a new form, a panku. Tom
Romios Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 11:02 AM
LOL Tom. This is a traditional Japanese haiku. I created nothing. I don't know the many schools and forms of Japanese haiku. Ilike this form, it's warm and welcoming to my poetic soul~ Be well, Tom Hugs, Pangie xxx
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 3:41 PM
Hello Panagiota, wow! a poem of Spring and the scent of flowers. Hugs Da\rlene xx
Romios Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 3:58 PM
Hello Darlene! Really lovely here. Maria bought a huge, mulri color spinner that blows in the wind, too. Mmm...Spring Pangie xx
Sands Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 3:15 PM
Great one! Well written :)
Romios Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 3:55 PM
Bless you Heidi. Appreciated. PANGiR xx
Hinshaw Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 2:58 PM
Great haiku! Expertly constructed, Pangie - Bob
Romios Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 3:52 PM
THANKS , Bob...never tried one like this before. Such a pleasure ...thank you. PANGIE XX
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