Spring Sky

the spring sky unburdens its clouds - songs of thunder

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Susan Ashley

Date: 9/3/2017 9:35:00 PM

Oh how lovely in content and imagery Joseph! Very beautiful lines, especially the last one. I love the sound of thunder, it's music to my ears (despite what my Summer Rain poem says... lol!) Great write :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/23/2017 7:34:00 AM

Nice one Joseph :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/23/2017 12:36:00 PM

A 7 for this great haiku--love the metaphor, Joseph! Janice

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/23/2017 9:53:00 AM

That last line, wow! thunderous songs are better than our music, isn't it??? beautiful, a 7:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2017 7:25:00 PM

wow, I love that middle line. I can't believe it if he only gives five wins because I am seeing so many good ones in this contest!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/21/2017 9:49:00 PM

Lovely image, Joseph