Spring Sky

the spring sky
 unburdens its clouds -
 songs of thunder
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kendrick Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 2:18 PM
Wow!! What a nice one. I enjoyed reading it . Thank you for sharing it with us. Soupmail..Sara K
Ashley Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 9:35 PM
Oh how lovely in content and imagery Joseph! Very beautiful lines, especially the last one. I love the sound of thunder, it's music to my ears (despite what my Summer Rain poem says... lol!) Great write :)
Sands Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 7:34 AM
Nice one Joseph :)
Canerdy Avatar
April 23, 2017 at 12:36 PM
A 7 for this great haiku--love the metaphor, Joseph! Janice
Daniel Avatar
April 23, 2017 at 9:53 AM
That last line, wow! thunderous songs are better than our music, isn't it??? beautiful, a 7:)
Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 7:25 PM
wow, I love that middle line. I can't believe it if he only gives five wins because I am seeing so many good ones in this contest!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 9:49 PM
Lovely image, Joseph
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