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Spring Sentiment

Come, let's go to the lake!
It's Spring and I am your
dove-in-waiting to take.

The dogs all out romping in
the freshly-contented grass.
I will listen to your Poetry and
give you no sass!

Two poetic souls bound as 
newborn ones.
Wrapped in Spring grass and
warmed by the benevolent sun.

              3/25/2021
                 ~2~

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Michael Ellis

Date: 3/30/2021 4:57:00 PM

Just when I need a lively breathing Poem. A tercet and two quatrains make for a great reading experience. Line 8 of course is my favorite of all..Two Poetic souls.. Sounds a lot like love to me!!! Bravo

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/31/2021 11:10:00 AM

He.lo Michael. Thank you got telling meit was a tercet and two quatrains, I never thought of that.soooo glad you liked Line 8! Love indeed))) you got that right. I am so p,eased with your Bravo! Hugs, Pangie XXOO

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/27/2021 12:22:00 PM

It's here, apparently a lot of living beings are blending for the season, I have baby chipmunks in my yard, young doves and cardinals and the lilies, narcissus, tulips and more and popping out all over the place. Happy Spring.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/27/2021 12:53:00 PM

Sweet!! Chipmunks and doves! Flowers blooming all over the city. Roses...lots of them won't bloom for 30 days or more. There are multiple bushes that will flower also. I don't know what kind they are. But...lovely!)) happy spring... Hugs... Pangie xx

Madelyn Mckay

Date: 3/27/2021 3:37:00 AM

I like this."Wrapped in Spring grass." I love labeling the sun "benevolent."

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/27/2021 10:36:00 AM

Madelyn, it is really helpful when we tell a Poet what worked. No point in rushing through poem with comments saying nothing. It also anchors the Poets together. Friendships are formed that way.at least, that's how I feel. I do not repeat the same comment to each Poet....that's like rubber stamping, I feel no Connection with them. I feel.,who are they...?. Thank you, hugs, Pangie xx