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Spring Revival

Acres of lush emerald meadows
burst forth from pregnant earth,
creating the perfect background for a
dazzling array of wildflowers.
Expectant mothers of beast and fowl
fill the countryside with new
generations, eager to find their way.
Honeybees and hummingbirds
in frenzied competition for sweet nectar.
Jasmine and gardenia blossoms
kindle their senses with a 
lustful, pungent fragrance.
Mares, folding new colts,
nudgeing them gently up
on quivering, spindly legs.
Ponds give travel to ducklings following in the 
quake of proud mamas.
Rainbow trout rush upstream to
spawn, before laying eggs in lazy pools.
Throughout floral scented air,
unfettered birds soar freely,
voicing a revival of hope and joy.
Whimsical butterflies take a rest on
xylem, between aireal ballets.
Young babes everywhere, renewing our world with a 
zest for life's adventures, awaiting.



02/16/15
Contest: Abecedarian
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/10/2015 3:15:00 PM
Arlene, really nice winning write, many congrats!
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Date: 3/4/2015 4:55:00 PM
Way to go with this creative winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/28/2015 7:37:00 PM
that was a really cute line about the butterflies and their aireal ballets. you had some great thoughts in this one. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 2/28/2015 2:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Arlene! Enchanting!
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Date: 2/27/2015 11:23:00 PM
Arlene, Congratulations **SKAT LOVE**
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Date: 2/27/2015 9:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Blessings
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Date: 2/27/2015 8:20:00 AM
your line Mares, folding new colts as a horse woman myself does not make sense sorry Arlene congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 2/27/2015 6:47:00 AM
Absolutely stunning Arlene - i am having such fun bringing spring into my day with these delightful poems - a 7 from me:-) Hugs and congrats xx
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Date: 2/25/2015 11:43:00 AM
And with this poem our spirits are reborn. I hope to see the world through eyes like yours. So beautiful.
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Date: 2/24/2015 8:34:00 AM
zest for lifes adventures awaiting... so true my friend... enjoyed your pen... hugs,nad
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Date: 2/18/2015 9:48:00 AM
Arlene, your poem is so full of the magnificent images of Spring, and it is so well-written with the smooth flow of words, which can be very difficult with this form. Fav +7, and best wishes for the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/18/2015 8:45:00 AM
Fantastic. This is one of the best I have seen in this form. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/17/2015 6:59:00 AM
Wow u have pictured the imagery in a creative awesome way, from jasmines to butterflies in vivid descriptions! Real delightful to read of. Kudos! Nice to read u again.
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Date: 2/16/2015 6:37:00 PM
Excellent imagery in this springtime kimo, Arlene. A winner, for sure!
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Date: 2/16/2015 1:41:00 PM
Your descriptive words paint a many colored canvas of sights that the reader can easily relate to while generating a smile. Well done. Emile.
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Date: 2/16/2015 10:44:00 AM
Very nice pen Arlene! enjoyed your abecedarian pretty piece my dear friend.A 7 from me! Enjoyed it!GL in the contest! I wish you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) xxx D"
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Date: 2/16/2015 9:38:00 AM
Beautiful Abecedarian Arlene . Well done !! Good luck in the contest 7.... Bev :(
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