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Spring Reigns

The skies fall with jewels
In gardens digging with tools
Blessed by the blossom

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Charlene Bird

April 30, 2009 at 8:19 PM

This is a gem in itself, you do carve a beautiful piece! Thanks for the comment on my work, always appreciated.

Farah Chamma

April 25, 2009 at 1:15 AM

Beautiful Haiku...I love the first line...It gives this strong sensation =) Thank you for sharing Farah, TYOne

L'Nass Shango

April 22, 2009 at 8:26 AM

Industrious hands, I see ... and as a gardner you planted a jewel in words.

April 19, 2009 at 4:45 PM

What an uplifting view in this one. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for your kind words on my haiku. Karen

Raul Moreno

April 19, 2009 at 1:20 PM

I loved the first line, the imagery is spectacular, nice job...Raul

Tyesha Ehigiator

April 19, 2009 at 7:03 AM

Beautiful haiku, one of my favorite forms...so delightful to read as I love spring...I like (The skies fall with jewels) Nice touch with the rhyme as it is very rare. Blessings Always, Tyesha