John Lawless Poet Haiku

Spring Raindrops

icy spring raindrops
diamonds on gossamer webs
cold spiders shiver

3/28/2021

Spring Haiku - Traditional Haiku Poetry Contest
Tania Kitchin - sponsor

((syllables counted on my fingers))

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Linda Milgate April 8, 2021 at 8:17 PM really really nice.

Sam Kauffman April 7, 2021 at 10:31 AM So visual and visceral John! There is often a chill in the air during early spring. You captured that feeling perfectly! Congratulations on your first place win.

Andrea Dietrich April 5, 2021 at 5:14 PM back with BIG congrats, John

Kim Merryman April 5, 2021 at 11:45 AM Excellent imagery, John! Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Jan Allison April 5, 2021 at 11:36 AM what super imagery John I will look out for cold spiders now lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith April 5, 2021 at 8:54 AM Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" Your cold spiders need a jacket. Have a blessed day/week...........

Tania Kitchin April 4, 2021 at 7:14 AM John, congratulations on your first place win, even though I don't like spiders, the imagery is superb!

Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2021 at 1:34 PM Really cool KU, John. i would like to see a spider shiver because they sure make ME shiver to see them!!

L Milton Hankins March 28, 2021 at 11:09 AM This is very nice haiku, John, especially in its focus on natural wonder. GL in the contest.