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Spring Raindrops

icy spring raindrops
diamonds on gossamer webs
cold spiders shiver

3/28/2021

Spring Haiku - Traditional Haiku Poetry Contest
Tania Kitchin - sponsor

((syllables counted on my fingers))

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Linda Milgate Date: 4/8/2021 8:17:00 PM really really nice. Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 4/7/2021 10:31:00 AM So visual and visceral John! There is often a chill in the air during early spring. You captured that feeling perfectly! Congratulations on your first place win. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/5/2021 5:14:00 PM back with BIG congrats, John Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 4/5/2021 11:45:00 AM Excellent imagery, John! Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 4/5/2021 11:36:00 AM what super imagery John I will look out for cold spiders now lol:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/5/2021 8:54:00 AM Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" Your cold spiders need a jacket. Have a blessed day/week........... Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 4/4/2021 7:14:00 AM John, congratulations on your first place win, even though I don't like spiders, the imagery is superb! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/28/2021 1:34:00 PM Really cool KU, John. i would like to see a spider shiver because they sure make ME shiver to see them!! Login to Reply

L Milton Hankins Date: 3/28/2021 11:09:00 AM This is very nice haiku, John, especially in its focus on natural wonder. GL in the contest. Login to Reply