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Spring Raindrops

icy spring raindrops diamonds on gossamer webs cold spiders shiver 3/28/2021 Spring Haiku - Traditional Haiku Poetry Contest Tania Kitchin - sponsor ((syllables counted on my fingers))

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Linda Milgate

Date: 4/8/2021 8:17:00 PM

really really nice.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/7/2021 10:31:00 AM

So visual and visceral John! There is often a chill in the air during early spring. You captured that feeling perfectly! Congratulations on your first place win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2021 5:14:00 PM

back with BIG congrats, John

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/5/2021 11:45:00 AM

Excellent imagery, John! Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Jan Allison

Date: 4/5/2021 11:36:00 AM

what super imagery John I will look out for cold spiders now lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/5/2021 8:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" Your cold spiders need a jacket. Have a blessed day/week...........

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/4/2021 7:14:00 AM

John, congratulations on your first place win, even though I don't like spiders, the imagery is superb!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2021 1:34:00 PM

Really cool KU, John. i would like to see a spider shiver because they sure make ME shiver to see them!!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/28/2021 11:09:00 AM

This is very nice haiku, John, especially in its focus on natural wonder. GL in the contest.