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Spring Rain

SPRING RAIN an early spring rain by a patch of ugly snow grass is greening up an early spring rain everything hangs it’s like looking through the clouds such a dreary day drop… drop… drop… …chinese torture please. come on and rain! Dave Austin

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/4/2016 4:05:00 PM

Love these haiku, Dave! About time we had some proper rain, even here in Malta...we are short of rain and the farmers have been up in arms:) ~ Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/31/2016 3:23:00 AM

It is difficult to have it look like rain and then just leave everyone hanging onto hope. The rains are such a blessing. I enjoyed your poem and how you formatted it too, Daver. Hope you enjoyed Easter. ; )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2016 4:08:00 PM

Especially love the last one. Awesome styling of it

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/30/2016 1:29:00 PM

Daver, lol,, wow,, I feel the insanity of the drops on the last haiku. Chinese methods are nuts. Well I'm sitting here in front of my computer waiting reading about, waiting for rain. HUGS. LINDA

Daver Austin
Date: 3/30/2016 1:36:00 PM

Thank you, dear. Now I shall visit you. Love, daver

Kelly Deschler

Date: 3/29/2016 11:52:00 PM

Rain can dampen our spirits, but it still has to be better than snow! ...And finally the first signs of spring are beginning to show themselves... A great set of haiku, Daver. Well done!

Daver Austin
Date: 3/30/2016 2:15:00 PM

Thanks for the visit. Catch you in a minute. daver