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Spring Rain

spring rain overnight dragging winter's chill... the butterfly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kerr Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 11:45 PM
Such a beautiful creation, Sara. It felt as if I was actually at the scene observing a transition, Howard
Kendrick Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 5:55 AM
Why, thank you, Howard. It turned quite chilly last night. Sara K
Gauthier Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 8:08 PM
a little gem
Kendrick Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 3:29 PM
Line, Thanks for stopping by and giving such a kind review of my work..I appreciate you dropping by..Sara
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March 30, 2016 at 6:48 PM
always a pleasure to read your haiku, Sara... LINDA
Hicks Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 12:34 AM
"dragging winter's chill" ... such a poignant image, Sarah. Masterfully written. You've captured a beautiful moment with this topnotch haiku. I really love it when people can give this form justice, and you did. To my Faves :)
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March 26, 2016 at 3:57 PM
A 7 and a favourite... A superb HAIKU with such beautiful language and a gorgeous illustration! BRAVO Sara!! Best wishes, Keith
Dietrich Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 3:32 PM
oooh, what a cool image, the butterfly dragging winter's chill!!!
Kendrick Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 4:19 PM
Thanks, Andrea..I hope that butterfly that I saw survived those two very cold night..Sara
Sathasivam Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 3:18 AM
Excellent. Lovely haiku. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 9:38 PM
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful Sara! I am making this a fave! #7. ;)
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March 22, 2016 at 6:17 AM
- A lovely poem, Sara - I wish you a wonderful Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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