Placed Fifth in: Your Choive L Poetry Contest by Brian Strand
Spring Rain Hiku 17 / / / / / / spring greyish c ~l ~ o ~u ~d ~s / / / / / / ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ d o / / w n / / p i a rain knocks at my w s e n a call from h e a v e n.
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