Spring Rain

clouds burst day brings spring rain drops fall on tin barn roof ping beat wash off loose dust breathe in clean air 2/1/2022 A Strand (1064) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/4/2022 2:01:00 AM

A winner I believe.

Valerie Staton

Date: 2/2/2022 10:47:00 AM

Nothing like the rain showing up cleaning away the grit and refreshing the air... Nice picture drawn with very few words. I enjoyed reading this.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/2/2022 6:08:00 AM

I love this one, Eve, I thought footles should be rhymed, but yours are great:)

Eve Roper
Date: 2/2/2022 10:15:00 AM

Hello, Jo, thank you for the inspirational compliment. Poetry soup definition. A footle is a 2 line, 2 syllable trochaiac monometer poem with an integral title suitable for light, witty, pertinent, topical verse.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/2/2022 2:01:00 AM

Love the fresh air after the rain, natures way of spring cleaning mother earth. Hope your week is going well Eve. Tom

Eve Roper
Date: 2/2/2022 10:16:00 AM

Thank you Tom. hugs eve