Eve Roper Poet Footle

Spring Rain

clouds burst
day brings
spring rain 
drops fall 
on tin 
barn roof 
ping beat
wash off
loose dust 
breathe in
clean air

2/1/2022


A Strand (1064) Poetry Contest
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Caren Krutsinger February 4, 2022 at 2:01 AM A winner I believe.

Valerie Staton February 2, 2022 at 10:47 AM Nothing like the rain showing up cleaning away the grit and refreshing the air... Nice picture drawn with very few words. I enjoyed reading this.

Joanna Daniel February 2, 2022 at 6:08 AM I love this one, Eve, I thought footles should be rhymed, but yours are great:) Eve Roper February 2, 2022 at 10:15 AM Hello, Jo, thank you for the inspirational compliment. Poetry soup definition. A footle is a 2 line, 2 syllable trochaiac monometer poem with an integral title suitable for light, witty, pertinent, topical verse.

Tom Cunningham February 2, 2022 at 2:01 AM Love the fresh air after the rain, natures way of spring cleaning mother earth. Hope your week is going well Eve. Tom Eve Roper February 2, 2022 at 10:16 AM Thank you Tom. hugs eve