Spring Rain

spring rain ten-thousand frog croaks collapse a rain-soaked silence

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/8/2018 7:59:00 PM

You did very well! Congrats on a fresh frog ku!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2018 7:21:00 PM

Oh I love this, and I see you used the frog kijo!! Well done. Congrats to you.

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/8/2018 3:06:00 PM

Well done Deborah, congratulations...

Jan Allison

Date: 3/8/2018 12:43:00 PM

love your take on the theme Deborah, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/8/2018 10:46:00 AM

Back with well deserved congrats on your win, Deborah.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/8/2018 10:42:00 AM

Such an innovative, "different" look at Spring rain!! Love it! Congrats, Deborah, on your trophy win! :) Gershon

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/8/2018 7:33:00 AM

Congratulations Deborah.

Mick Talbot

Date: 3/8/2018 7:28:00 AM

WOW, how much of a pleasure I got out of reading all the entries, yours most definitely one of my winners! The plight of frogs worldwide is now serious, pleased you're putting it out there! Congratulations Deborah... Mick

Deborah Guenther Beachboard
Date: 3/8/2018 1:45:00 PM

Thank you. I enjoyed writing this.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/5/2018 7:34:00 PM

Sad plight of disappearing frogs. So necessary to bring attention to the problem. Well done, Deborah.