Spring Rain

spring rain
ten-thousand frog croaks collapse
a rain-soaked silence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 7:59 PM
You did very well! Congrats on a fresh frog ku!
Dietrich Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 7:21 PM
Oh I love this, and I see you used the frog kijo!! Well done. Congrats to you.
Smith Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 3:06 PM
Well done Deborah, congratulations...
Allison Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 12:43 PM
love your take on the theme Deborah, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 10:46 AM
Back with well deserved congrats on your win, Deborah.
Wolf Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 10:42 AM
Such an innovative, "different" look at Spring rain!! Love it! Congrats, Deborah, on your trophy win! :) Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Congratulations Deborah.
Talbot Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 7:28 AM
WOW, how much of a pleasure I got out of reading all the entries, yours most definitely one of my winners! The plight of frogs worldwide is now serious, pleased you're putting it out there! Congratulations Deborah... Mick
Beachboard Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 1:45 PM
Thank you. I enjoyed writing this.
Gauthier Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Sad plight of disappearing frogs. So necessary to bring attention to the problem. Well done, Deborah.
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