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Spring Power

Gentle spring showers Strike of Lightning earth shakes Pine tree split in half

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Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/5/2009 7:44:00 AM

This is a wonderful haiku, I think thunderstorm is very powerful; it’s capable of destroying the strongest of all buildings. It’s hard to believe. I love the flow of words and the scope of these piece. We don’t have spring in Africa but I have written on autumn/fall, winter, spring and summer, all of which I am yet to experience. Please take note of what I told you

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 3/9/2009 4:41:00 PM

it`s spring time............o` Barbara

Date: 2/23/2009 2:51:00 PM

Nice use of imagery in this poem for a different view on spring. The title enhances the poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Barbara Washington

Date: 2/22/2009 11:12:00 PM

This happen to a tree in my neighborhood a few springs seasons ago. glad you like it Arany, Thanks for commenting.

Arany P.

Date: 2/22/2009 11:01:00 PM

a very different outlook... like it! ~ Arany