Spring Power

Gentle spring showers 
Strike of Lightning earth shakes
Pine tree split in half
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Adeite Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 7:44 AM
This is a wonderful haiku, I think thunderstorm is very powerful; it’s capable of destroying the strongest of all buildings. It’s hard to believe. I love the flow of words and the scope of these piece. We don’t have spring in Africa but I have written on autumn/fall, winter, spring and summer, all of which I am yet to experience. Please take note of what I told you
Iloduba Jnr Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 4:41 PM
it`s spring time............o` Barbara
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February 23, 2009 at 2:51 PM
Nice use of imagery in this poem for a different view on spring. The title enhances the poem. Keep on writing! Karen
Washington Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 11:12 PM
This happen to a tree in my neighborhood a few springs seasons ago. glad you like it Arany, Thanks for commenting.
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February 22, 2009 at 11:01 PM
a very different outlook... like it! ~ Arany
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