Spring Mud

Mud
first sign
of spring thaw
slippery worms
dance with the robins
nestlings calling
the cadence
slow step
squish

2/19/2022

Springtime Ninette Contest
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Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 4:47 PM
this one is very unique and creative. I like it a lot. congrats on your win
Krutsinger Avatar
February 27, 2022 at 3:35 PM
Pretty impressive Ninette
Legros Kelley Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 10:05 PM
This made me smile John! Somehow you made worms and mud sound like a picnic...as it was obviously, for the sweet little nestlings! I love this :) <3
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