Spring Meadow

~Newly born spring lambs, 
         
           without a thought of the rain,

                     suckle rich, warm milk~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 7, 2009 at 12:52 PM
I can't believe I missed this, Great work Carrie, I loved its' entirety...Raul
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April 3, 2009 at 1:05 PM
what a delightful write, this brought a smile to my face, and I hope that all is well with you, take care
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April 3, 2009 at 2:34 AM
What a beautiful picture you create with your version of haiku. This set up I do not recognise as I only know of the 5-7-5 syllable count haiku. However it does not take away from the wonderful art created. Thanks for your kindness of commenting my writing, Anna-Marie.
Winter Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 6:29 AM
Aww, so sweet. I want to be a country girl. How lucky you are. So wonderful. Love, Shar
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April 1, 2009 at 8:26 PM
Oooooo I love baby lambs, do you have some? Can I visit?
Jordan Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 7:46 PM
Hi Carrie how is my neighbor doing - I liked this haiku more than any i have read I do believe - i was just over by a friend of mines house and he has a herd of goats with many newborn - I have missed you all life has really gotten busy on me - An awful lot of amazing things are taking place in my life - I do hope to be back on a regular basis though it will have to be in the evening - It feels good to be getting back into life again - this is going in my favs - God Bless - YF4L, mj
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