Spring Meadow

~Newly born spring lambs, without a thought of the rain, suckle rich, warm milk~

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Raul Moreno

Date: 4/7/2009 12:52:00 PM

I can't believe I missed this, Great work Carrie, I loved its' entirety...Raul

Deneen White

Date: 4/3/2009 1:05:00 PM

what a delightful write, this brought a smile to my face, and I hope that all is well with you, take care

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 4/3/2009 2:34:00 AM

What a beautiful picture you create with your version of haiku. This set up I do not recognise as I only know of the 5-7-5 syllable count haiku. However it does not take away from the wonderful art created. Thanks for your kindness of commenting my writing, Anna-Marie.

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/2/2009 6:29:00 AM

Aww, so sweet. I want to be a country girl. How lucky you are. So wonderful. Love, Shar

Laurie Ginn

Date: 4/1/2009 8:26:00 PM

Oooooo I love baby lambs, do you have some? Can I visit?

Michael Jordan

Date: 4/1/2009 7:46:00 PM

Hi Carrie how is my neighbor doing - I liked this haiku more than any i have read I do believe - i was just over by a friend of mines house and he has a herd of goats with many newborn - I have missed you all life has really gotten busy on me - An awful lot of amazing things are taking place in my life - I do hope to be back on a regular basis though it will have to be in the evening - It feels good to be getting back into life again - this is going in my favs - God Bless - YF4L, mj