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Spring Is Coming Soon

Sweet you look in warm rain Peeling the soil for chocolate chains Recalling Vincent van Gogh Inklings of green mailbox Nestling molecules of paradise Greeting us in the melting ice In the flute of your green wood Soft Grosbeak in the neighborhood Comely you look Oomph in your brook Mystic whisper in the air on your moonflowers Images of dreamy hours Nectarous noise in our hemoglobin Green and pink touches you offer umpteen Shadows of your strawberry stories Oleander glories Open the boat’s door No more desolation, quick pulse of footfall in the silken shore ___________________________________________________ 19 March, 2017

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Date: 3/29/2017 11:25:00 AM
Very imaginative use of words and skillfully constructed. It is well written with powerful imagery that liberate their presence from the page and enter our minds with ease of skill. Emile.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/1/2017 10:26:00 AM
Thanks for beautifully expressing what you want to say ... This reinforces the truth that every poem is a two way process ... The responsibility doesn't end just as soon as I write and post a poem ... I ask myself repeatedly : To what end? ... Thank you once again ... It is true that sometimes I get answer and sometimes don't ...
Date: 3/21/2017 9:37:00 AM
Nicely penned Acrostic..GL in the contest
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/22/2017 9:36:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 3/19/2017 7:23:00 PM
This is indeed the spring's song so marvelously composed dear, Probir! A 7 my friend!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/20/2017 6:42:00 AM
Thank you, Demetrios ...
Date: 3/19/2017 10:06:00 AM
Very nice use of vocabulary, Probir:) all the best:)
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