Spring Is Coming Soon 1

S-uns kisses and soft rain
P-rovokes the earth,
R-ousing shoots upwards.
I-ndelible colours burst into life,
N-ature sings to us her
G-lorious melodies.

I-nsects buzz and flutter
S-oftly between blooming blossoms.

C-rocuses brighten the world
O-rnately embroidering the ground.
M-eadow flowers quiver in the breeze
I-mploring us to be in
N-atures awakening landscape.
G-one are the scars of Winter.

S-pring is busy.
O-bediently little lambs gambol after mothers,
O-pening buds turn toward the sun.
N-ow the earth laughs.

18th March 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/16/2017 1:23:00 PM
Phew just on another level, love it
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 4/17/2017 1:51:00 AM
Thank you for commenting.
Date: 3/21/2017 10:01:00 AM
This is lovely too, Elizabeth:)
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/21/2017 2:56:00 PM
Thank you Jo
Date: 3/20/2017 3:54:00 AM
You have two almost identical poems. I like both of them. Springs brings joy to the heart as flowers and new born animals are seen all around. Great acrostic and wish you success.
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/20/2017 4:06:00 AM
I wrote the first one Victor for Laura's contest but then realised that she preferred a rhyming acrostic so I revised this one to enter her competition.
Date: 3/19/2017 8:52:00 PM
What a wonderful acrostic dedicated to spring, loved it. A 7 for you my dear.
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/20/2017 2:01:00 AM
Thank you Maria.
Date: 3/18/2017 8:56:00 PM
Hi Elizabeth, a wonderful acrostic. Spring, beloved spring, you make it sing off the tongue. You give life to the season of rebirth. I do love when spring comes along. An excellent acrostic Elizabeth. Hugs....Mike. XX. This has to be a seven and a fave.
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/19/2017 2:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Mike for your lovely comments. This was my first attempt for Laura's contest before I read her details properly and saw that she prefers rhyme. I would love you to check out my revised acrostic for the contest.
Date: 3/18/2017 8:57:00 AM
Lovely spring acrostic ... Enjoyed reading it ...
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/18/2017 9:13:00 AM
Thank you Probir. I wrote this for Laura's contest and then realised she would prefer a rhyme so check out my revised acrostic.
Date: 3/18/2017 5:49:00 AM
Beautiful acrostic Elizabeth, lovely images of new life produced by the wonderful season of spring, flows really well, good luck in contest, Roy. :)
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/18/2017 6:22:00 AM
Thank you, I quite liked it but I have entered a revised acrostic now as I see Laura would prefer a rhyming poem. Fingers crossed.
Date: 3/18/2017 4:48:00 AM
what a beautiful spring acrostic Elizabeth - i love the rejuvenation of the earth with all the beautiful spring flowers:-) hugs Jan xx
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/18/2017 6:23:00 AM
Thank you Jan, attempt one, check out my second Spring acrostic!
Date: 3/18/2017 4:45:00 AM
A wonderful spring acrostic, Elizabeth. Nature's awakening - so looking forward to spring. T.J
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/18/2017 6:24:00 AM
Thank you Teppo, I do love Spring.