1st in Illusku 4 Poetry Contest (Sponsor: JCB Brul)
Judged: 26th April, 2026
\ || / spring ==O== beams / || \ gilding \ earth \\ \ tulips \\ blush (|)(|)(|)(|)(|) (|)(|)(|)(|)(|) in these |~|~|~|~|~|~|~|~|~|~ warm .^---^. ^---^ streams (>^x^<) (>^o^<) (u u)~~*~~(v v) arousing tabbies ______________________________________ spring beams gilding earth tulips blush in these warm streams arousing tabbies
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