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Spring Hiku 14


             Spring Hiku 14                               _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ __ __ __ _
                                                                I     ~~~ ~           ~ ~ ~       I 
                                                                I   ~ ~ ~ ~ ~     ~ ~ ~ ~ ~   I 
spring red rose blossoms                            I      ~ II~           ~ II~          I  
                                                                I         II                 II            I
           sprinkled in private garden               I_ _ _ II_ __ __ _ _II_ _ __ _ I
		
		          scent on nuptial bed	          I~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~I 
                                                                  I  .   .   .  .   .   .  .  . I 
	                                                          I  .  .   .  .   .  .   .  .  I
                                                                  I ~ ~ ~   ~   ~   ~ ~I
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Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 10:55 AM
Congrats on your win. That last line is super nice
Guptar Avatar
May 20, 2025 at 12:02 PM
Thanks a lot dear poetess for appreciating the write and your kind wishes. May your day be filled with blessings of light.
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