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Spring Has Sprung

xanthic daffodil your bright trumpet heralds Spring robin builds a nest Spring Haiku Poetry Contest sponsored by Tania Kitchin 3/1/19
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Kendrick Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 4:54 PM
I have read your Haiku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
Allison Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 5:05 PM
Thanks so much Sara:-) hugs Jan xx
Toney Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 6:35 PM
I love this, Jan! A Fav for sure :) ~Mark
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 6:39 PM
thanks so much Mark:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 2:13 PM
Well done, my friend, and awesome first word Xanthic! Congrats.
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 2:16 PM
thanks Andrea I discovered the word when I was doing a spring abecadarian:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:45 PM
Lovely imagery Jan, congrats. :)
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:47 PM
Cheers Gary:-) hugs Jan xx
Marc Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:39 PM
A well deserved win ~ congratulations Jan!
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:47 PM
Thanks so much PM:-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 11:33 AM
Three lines of attractive imagery, Jan! Congratulations on your high-flying win. Hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:47 PM
Thanks so much Paul, I've come a long way since I wrote my first haiku back in 2014!:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 9:57 AM
Congrats on your top win Jan..
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:46 PM
Thanks so much Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 8:16 AM
Back with Congratulations! :))) xomo! <3
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:46 PM
Thanks so much Mo:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 7:50 AM
Congrats on your win, Jan.
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:45 PM
Thanks so much Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Messina Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 7:30 AM
Very well penned, Jan. Congrats on your win. Hugs // Charlie
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:45 PM
Thanks Charles I had fun writing for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Knowlton Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 7:21 AM
Love it Jan!…So much said. Congrats.
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:45 PM
Thanks so much Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx
Gilmour Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 7:19 AM
Gorgeous Haiku Jan, many congrats on your top placement, Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:44 PM
Thanks so much Ann:-) hugs Jan xx
Sands Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 7:14 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations for your win :)
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:43 PM
Thanks so much Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 7:14 AM
Hi Jan, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:43 PM
Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 6:39 AM
Congratulations Jan, wonderful win...
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:42 PM
Thanks so much Charlie I enjoyed the challenge:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 6:34 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely Spring Haiku, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:41 PM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 5:55 AM
Back with congrats Jan, gone colder now, it was too good to last. Tom.
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 6:06 AM
got Storm Freya approaching looks like we are in for a tough time - the ferry is going early I didn't think the vomit comet would sail at all lol:-) Just glad I'm indoors, busy getting tea prepped, well the sauteed onions and mushrooms to go with the steak later :-) have a lovely Sunday:-) hugs jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 5:22 AM
A beautifully written haiku Jan, congratulations on your first place win!
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 5:28 AM
Thanks so much Tania, I look forward to reading the other winning poems:-) hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 3:10 AM
birdifull!
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 4:38 AM
aww thanks, your comment is so tweet:-) hugs jan xx
Krutsinger Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 4:40 AM
No one uses the word xanthic Jan, except you. I read a trillion words a day, and I had never read this one. Now I am running for a fancy dictionary. I love it when this happens, so thank you for the education. This one makes me want to "herald spring" myself. Blizzard coming back tomorrow here, alas!
Allison Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 6:42 AM
I learned the word on soup when i was writing a spring abecadarian poem, its much more descriptive than yellow:-) hugs Jan xx
Kiser Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 6:51 PM
Beautiful Haiku; robins are so cute.
Allison Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 6:41 AM
Thanks ML:-) I always smile when I see a robin they are so cute:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 6:12 PM
Such lovely Imagery Jan. :)
Allison Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 6:18 PM
thanks Gary:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 2:37 PM
- Spring is a beautiful time ... but, we still have night frosts ... a little early - A beautiful poem, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest
Allison Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 4:32 PM
I'm hoping we don't get frosts as I've planted lots of seeds this week!:-) hugs Jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 1:13 PM
A most timely daffodil! Happy Saint David's Day! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 1:15 PM
thanks Rico, we have lots of daffs in flower I leave them in the garden they last such a short time if I pick them:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 11:55 AM
WoW! Jan, This is just lovely. Great imagery ! I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 12:14 PM
thanks Alexis:-) I hope Tania likes it:-) hugs jan xx
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