Spring Has Changed

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Spring forms changed. Jasmine limps. Corn plaques shirred. Shore is without breeze now. I didn't grasp my own home! Public blame current flow. Pulse spurred over the dome. Soft breeze fades in midst snow. They're saying its spring glom! I'm getting weirder every minute. Pulse can't yield to my chest and calm down! At once, the ocean is turbulent. Lonesome went to sit on barren mound. I gaze out to the long horizon. When will the spring ship arrive in port? Only then will the high tides slow down? Tonight is a full moon! Oh, my dream Weakened, returned with shattered vision. Written: July 01, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/9/2021 4:10:00 AM

Good luck in the contest. I like your imagery, and the imagery in your photo.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/2/2021 5:01:00 AM

Excellent write--full of images and feelings in this hard to execute form. Well done, Lasaad. All the best.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/2/2021 7:01:00 AM

Thanks for you delightful comment dear friend Vijay, I’m glad you like it, my kindest regards.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/2/2021 4:40:00 AM

A worthy poem! Enjoyed its tension very much!

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/2/2021 7:03:00 AM

Thanks for your appreciation Kim, I’m so glad you enjoyed it, blessings and best wishes

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/2/2021 3:33:00 AM

Your poem, a poetic breeze that caresses the heart and mind, making one think of the depth of your message, my dearest friend, Lasaad. God bless you.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/2/2021 7:04:00 AM

Thank you so much dearest friend Demetrios, your wonderful comment shed more allure to my poem. Blessings and my very best regards

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/2/2021 1:49:00 AM

Your right, seasons have changed, nothing is as it was. I can remember when spring really meant spring and the seasons would follow in an orderly manner. All expectations have been shattered.....Delice

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/2/2021 7:07:00 AM

So true Dear friend, all expectations have been shattered, appreciate your great comment and wise thoughts, blessings and deepest regards

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/2/2021 12:51:00 AM

The earth has moved on its axis and is bound to have some climatic changes, sometimes for the worse. So well done. Great poetry.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/2/2021 7:10:00 AM

Thanks my Friend Victor, and that’s true, too many changes happened and more is still waiting, your appreciation means a lot to me. Blessings and best regards