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Spring Has Changed

Spring forms changed.
Jasmine limps.
Corn plaques shirred.

Shore is without breeze now. 
I didn't grasp my own home!
Public blame current flow. 
Pulse spurred over the dome.
Soft breeze fades in midst snow.
They're saying its spring glom!

I'm getting weirder every minute.
Pulse can't yield to my chest and calm down!
At once, the ocean is turbulent.
Lonesome went to sit on barren mound.
I gaze out to the long horizon.
When will the spring ship arrive in port?
Only then will the high tides slow down?
Tonight is a full moon! Oh, my dream
Weakened, returned with shattered vision.




Written: July 01, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger July 9, 2021 at 4:10 AM Good luck in the contest. I like your imagery, and the imagery in your photo.

Vijay Pandit July 2, 2021 at 5:01 AM Excellent write--full of images and feelings in this hard to execute form. Well done, Lasaad. All the best. Sotto Poet July 2, 2021 at 7:01 AM Thanks for you delightful comment dear friend Vijay, I’m glad you like it, my kindest regards.

Kim Rodrigues July 2, 2021 at 4:40 AM A worthy poem! Enjoyed its tension very much! Sotto Poet July 2, 2021 at 7:03 AM Thanks for your appreciation Kim, I’m so glad you enjoyed it, blessings and best wishes

Demetrios Trifiatis July 2, 2021 at 3:33 AM Your poem, a poetic breeze that caresses the heart and mind, making one think of the depth of your message, my dearest friend, Lasaad. God bless you. Sotto Poet July 2, 2021 at 7:04 AM Thank you so much dearest friend Demetrios, your wonderful comment shed more allure to my poem. Blessings and my very best regards

Delice Arleen Skelly July 2, 2021 at 1:49 AM Your right, seasons have changed, nothing is as it was. I can remember when spring really meant spring and the seasons would follow in an orderly manner. All expectations have been shattered.....Delice Sotto Poet July 2, 2021 at 7:07 AM So true Dear friend, all expectations have been shattered, appreciate your great comment and wise thoughts, blessings and deepest regards

Victor Buhagiar July 2, 2021 at 12:51 AM The earth has moved on its axis and is bound to have some climatic changes, sometimes for the worse. So well done. Great poetry. Sotto Poet July 2, 2021 at 7:10 AM Thanks my Friend Victor, and that’s true, too many changes happened and more is still waiting, your appreciation means a lot to me. Blessings and best regards