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Spring Haiku String

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Today 6 of my haiku were selected and translated on Haiku Column. 
Thank you Mine Sensei and Chiaki Sensei. (4th February 2021)

spring rain -
the blessing of forgiveness 

hazed in tears -
the poignant moment of departure				

spring rain -
the soothing tears of relief 

spring storm -
a child cowers under his bed

the first spring wind -
a sprite plays the flute

heat haze -
anger impairs his judgement 

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Jack Horne

Date: 3/5/2021 12:49:00 PM

just enjoying these again, my friend

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/4/2021 6:47:00 AM

How cool, congrats on being selected.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/23/2021 7:23:00 AM

Thank you Richard. Best regards // paul

Jack Horne

Date: 2/23/2021 11:37:00 AM

well done indeed - LOVE them all, especially the sprite one

Paul Callus
Date: 5/23/2021 7:24:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed, Jack. Thank you for stopping by. Hope you're keeping well. Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/16/2021 1:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful accomplishment Paul. These are very deserving of the honor. I love your imaginative imagery. I am very delighted for you. Blessings xxoo

Paul Callus
Date: 2/21/2021 3:21:00 AM

Thank you dear Connie. Your continuous support and friendship are sincerely appreciated. Blessings xx // paul

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/15/2021 8:29:00 AM

Enjoyed this string of haiku Paul. Well done. love phyl

Paul Callus
Date: 2/21/2021 3:20:00 AM

Thank you, Phyllis. Glad you enjoyed. Hope you're keeping well. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2021 5:18:00 PM

thanks for the comment about Scarlett. You are so right about that!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/12/2021 2:25:00 PM

Supraja Kannan

Date: 2/10/2021 4:46:00 AM

Wow!!! That's a beautiful string!!! Congratulations...

Paul Callus
Date: 2/12/2021 2:26:00 PM

Thank you, Supraja..I love your reaction! Regards // paul

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/7/2021 9:34:00 PM

LOve the imagery Paul. Number 6 i particularly like.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/12/2021 2:26:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting, my friend. Regards // paul

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/7/2021 8:41:00 PM

Bravo!! A most well deserved recognition my dear friend. Great form- wonderful presentation.. God bless...

Paul Callus
Date: 2/12/2021 2:27:00 PM

Thank you, Robert. I enjoyed sampling some of your latest works. Regards & blessings // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2021 2:30:00 PM

wow, that is so cool, Paul. Congratulations

Paul Callus
Date: 2/12/2021 2:28:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Have a lovely weekend! // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/5/2021 3:07:00 AM

- Congratulations well deserving of your excellence ... beautiful to read, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/12/2021 2:29:00 PM

Thank you, my friend Anne-Lise:) Your lovely comments and congrats are appreciated

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/4/2021 5:32:00 PM

Hi Paul, I am not surprised because you are a great writer. Each one of them contains amazing imagery. Congratulations, my friend, I’m so happy for you:-) Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 2/12/2021 2:30:00 PM

You are too kind my dear friend :) Thank you. Enjoy the weekend. Regards // paul

W.A. Cholt

Date: 2/4/2021 4:17:00 PM

Powerful images compressed into a delightful form. Congratulations on being selected and translated on Haiku column.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/12/2021 2:36:00 PM

Thank you W.A. Two-line haiku with one kigo in one of the lines is always gaining more popularity. Regards // paul