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Spring Haiku Sonnet

goodbye cold winter here comes the beautiful spring tulips show its hues yellow daffodils dance to the whispers of wind slowly bow and fade pink cherry blossoms beauty hard to comprehend feast for birds and bees in yellow and gold marigold shines in my heart stays bright till autumn golden poppies are pretty yellow mustard sway nicely Syllables Per Line: 5 7 5 0 5 7 5 0 5 7 5 0 5 7 5 0 7 7 Learning exercise

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Jay Narain

Date: 5/9/2023 5:06:00 PM

Thanks Sandra. I already modified it. I have Random Thoughts hs entered in competition. Give me your opinion on that.

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/9/2023 1:31:00 PM

So nicely written with lovely imagery, Jay! I really like the flowers you chose to present the beauty of spring. If you were to enter this into the contest, all first words on each line should not be capitalized, and no commas or periods. (Haiku rules). And the final two lines need to rhyme. You should enter it in the contest! Sandra

Jay Narain
Date: 5/9/2023 3:51:00 PM

Thank you Sandra. I fif not know all the rules