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Spring Haiku Sequence

azalea blossoms
fuchsia, pink, white, red --
bees are buzzing

hummingbird flutters
near backyard feeder--
hello again

pollen in the air
allergies are flaring--
warmer days and nights

4/17/21
For M.L. Kiser's
Spring Haiku sequence contest

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Aniruddha Pathak Date: 6/27/2021 4:39:00 AM A beautiful string of haikus on spring, a winning one, congrats....so late Login to Reply

Frances Schiavina Date: 5/7/2021 7:14:00 AM Best congratulations on your winning beautiful descriptive poem Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 5/8/2021 12:03:00 PM Thank you, Frances!

Anisha Dutta Date: 4/30/2021 11:03:00 AM NICE FLOW. Congrats to win. Love. Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 5/3/2021 6:46:00 PM Thank you, Anisha!

Juliet Ligon Date: 4/28/2021 8:43:00 AM Beautiful, inviting haiku chain. Congratulations! Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 5/3/2021 6:45:00 PM Thank you, Juliet!

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/27/2021 4:58:00 PM Great imagery! Congratulations, Kim! Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 5/3/2021 6:45:00 PM Thank you, Kim!

Jan Allison Date: 4/27/2021 4:50:00 PM what a lovely string of haiku, many congrats Kim:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 5/3/2021 6:45:00 PM Thank you, Jan!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/27/2021 2:21:00 PM a lovely sequence, dear. Congrats on the big win!! Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 5/3/2021 6:44:00 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/27/2021 10:53:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful spring haiku. I was there. Have a blessed day................................... Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 5/3/2021 6:44:00 PM Thank you, Paula!

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 4/27/2021 10:10:00 AM Beautiful Kim, congrats on your win, glad springtime is here, I appreciated your visit on my page, thank you :) Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 5/3/2021 6:44:00 PM Thank you, Vie!

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 4/26/2021 8:42:00 PM Wonderful imagery amid delightful spring sensations! Congratulations, Kim. Best wishes, Evelyn Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 5/3/2021 6:43:00 PM Thank you, Evelyn!

John Lawless Date: 4/26/2021 3:14:00 PM Kim, you're making Spring blush with these cleverly colorful images Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 5/3/2021 6:42:00 PM Thank you, John!

Sam Kauffman Date: 4/26/2021 11:29:00 AM If I just heard a sneeze - bless you! Such a delightful picture of spring. Love the humor in your third haiku! Congratulations and blessings for your allergies! Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 5/3/2021 6:42:00 PM I have been sneezing a bit. Thank you for commenting, Sam!

Christuraj Alex Date: 4/26/2021 11:11:00 AM Congratulations! Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 5/3/2021 6:41:00 PM Thank you!

Howard Kerr Date: 4/22/2021 7:27:00 AM Hi Kim, A splendid sequence of colour and imagery. Unsurpassable. Thanks for Robots award which I cherish and your insights on this work Howard Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 12:50:00 PM Thank you, Howard and you are welcome!

Susan Ashley Date: 4/19/2021 7:41:00 AM Dear Kim, your haiku strand are vivid and vibrant with color, movement and life! A feast for the senses and a perfect representation of Spring. Simply superb! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~ Susan Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 12:50:00 PM Thank you, Susan!

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/19/2021 7:05:00 AM I am delighted to read about the azaleas blooming. I think they are so awesome and add such a nice touch to a yard. The hummers fascinate me every year. Pollen makes me sick every year some years worse than others. Your visit to my page cracked me up. Sara Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 12:49:00 PM Glad I could make you smile, Sara! Thank you for commenting!

Harry Horsman Date: 4/17/2021 8:59:00 PM lovely Haiku, Kim. Your poems complement the season. Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 12:48:00 PM Thank you, Harry!

L Milton Hankins Date: 4/17/2021 8:24:00 PM Ah, so very nice, Kim. Well, I think it should place very near the top, but who am I to say? Anyway, it's a fine, delicate sequence of haiku. Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 12:48:00 PM Thank you, Milton!