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Spring Haiku Sequence

azalea blossoms fuchsia, pink, white, red -- bees are buzzing hummingbird flutters near backyard feeder-- hello again pollen in the air allergies are flaring-- warmer days and nights 4/17/21 For M.L. Kiser's Spring Haiku sequence contest

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Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 6/27/2021 4:39:00 AM

A beautiful string of haikus on spring, a winning one, congrats....so late

Frances Schiavina

Date: 5/7/2021 7:14:00 AM

Best congratulations on your winning beautiful descriptive poem

Kim Merryman
Date: 5/8/2021 12:03:00 PM

Thank you, Frances!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/30/2021 11:03:00 AM

NICE FLOW. Congrats to win. Love.

Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:46:00 PM

Thank you, Anisha!

Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/28/2021 8:43:00 AM

Beautiful, inviting haiku chain. Congratulations!

Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:45:00 PM

Thank you, Juliet!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/27/2021 4:58:00 PM

Great imagery! Congratulations, Kim!

Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:45:00 PM

Thank you, Kim!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/27/2021 4:50:00 PM

what a lovely string of haiku, many congrats Kim:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:45:00 PM

Thank you, Jan!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2021 2:21:00 PM

a lovely sequence, dear. Congrats on the big win!!

Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:44:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/27/2021 10:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful spring haiku. I was there. Have a blessed day...................................

Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:44:00 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/27/2021 10:10:00 AM

Beautiful Kim, congrats on your win, glad springtime is here, I appreciated your visit on my page, thank you :)

Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:44:00 PM

Thank you, Vie!

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 4/26/2021 10:23:00 PM

Kim, congratulations on your fine haiku win! You mentioned allergies, and all. And, I like the "hello again" line. Carol Louise

Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:43:00 PM

Thank you, Carol Louise!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/26/2021 8:42:00 PM

Wonderful imagery amid delightful spring sensations! Congratulations, Kim. Best wishes, Evelyn

Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:43:00 PM

Thank you, Evelyn!

John Lawless

Date: 4/26/2021 3:14:00 PM

Kim, you're making Spring blush with these cleverly colorful images

Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:42:00 PM

Thank you, John!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/26/2021 11:29:00 AM

If I just heard a sneeze - bless you! Such a delightful picture of spring. Love the humor in your third haiku! Congratulations and blessings for your allergies!

Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:42:00 PM

I have been sneezing a bit. Thank you for commenting, Sam!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/26/2021 11:11:00 AM

Congratulations!

Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:41:00 PM

Thank you!

Howard Kerr

Date: 4/22/2021 7:27:00 AM

Hi Kim, A splendid sequence of colour and imagery. Unsurpassable. Thanks for Robots award which I cherish and your insights on this work Howard

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 12:50:00 PM

Thank you, Howard and you are welcome!

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/19/2021 7:41:00 AM

Dear Kim, your haiku strand are vivid and vibrant with color, movement and life! A feast for the senses and a perfect representation of Spring. Simply superb! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~ Susan

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 12:50:00 PM

Thank you, Susan!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/19/2021 7:05:00 AM

I am delighted to read about the azaleas blooming. I think they are so awesome and add such a nice touch to a yard. The hummers fascinate me every year. Pollen makes me sick every year some years worse than others. Your visit to my page cracked me up. Sara

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 12:49:00 PM

Glad I could make you smile, Sara! Thank you for commenting!

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/17/2021 8:59:00 PM

lovely Haiku, Kim. Your poems complement the season.

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 12:48:00 PM

Thank you, Harry!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/17/2021 8:24:00 PM

Ah, so very nice, Kim. Well, I think it should place very near the top, but who am I to say? Anyway, it's a fine, delicate sequence of haiku.

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 12:48:00 PM

Thank you, Milton!