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spring haiku sequence

azalea blossoms fuchsia, pink, white, red -- bees are buzzing hummingbird flutters near backyard feeder-- hello again pollen in the air allergies are flaring-- warmer days and nights
4/17/21 For M.L. Kiser's Spring Haiku sequence contest

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Date: 6/27/2021 4:39:00 AM
A beautiful string of haikus on spring, a winning one, congrats....so late
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Date: 5/7/2021 7:14:00 AM
Best congratulations on your winning beautiful descriptive poem
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/8/2021 12:03:00 PM
Thank you, Frances!
Date: 4/30/2021 11:03:00 AM
NICE FLOW. Congrats to win. Love.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:46:00 PM
Thank you, Anisha!
Date: 4/28/2021 8:43:00 AM
Beautiful, inviting haiku chain. Congratulations!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:45:00 PM
Thank you, Juliet!
Date: 4/27/2021 4:58:00 PM
Great imagery! Congratulations, Kim!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:45:00 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 4/27/2021 4:50:00 PM
what a lovely string of haiku, many congrats Kim:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:45:00 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Date: 4/27/2021 2:21:00 PM
a lovely sequence, dear. Congrats on the big win!!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 4/27/2021 10:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful spring haiku. I was there. Have a blessed day...................................
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 4/27/2021 10:10:00 AM
Beautiful Kim, congrats on your win, glad springtime is here, I appreciated your visit on my page, thank you :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Vie!
Date: 4/26/2021 10:23:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your fine haiku win! You mentioned allergies, and all. And, I like the "hello again" line. Carol Louise
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:43:00 PM
Thank you, Carol Louise!
Date: 4/26/2021 8:42:00 PM
Wonderful imagery amid delightful spring sensations! Congratulations, Kim. Best wishes, Evelyn
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:43:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Date: 4/26/2021 3:14:00 PM
Kim, you're making Spring blush with these cleverly colorful images
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:42:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 4/26/2021 11:29:00 AM
If I just heard a sneeze - bless you! Such a delightful picture of spring. Love the humor in your third haiku! Congratulations and blessings for your allergies!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:42:00 PM
I have been sneezing a bit. Thank you for commenting, Sam!
Date: 4/26/2021 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/3/2021 6:41:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 4/22/2021 7:27:00 AM
Hi Kim, A splendid sequence of colour and imagery. Unsurpassable. Thanks for Robots award which I cherish and your insights on this work Howard
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 12:50:00 PM
Thank you, Howard and you are welcome!
Date: 4/19/2021 7:41:00 AM
Dear Kim, your haiku strand are vivid and vibrant with color, movement and life! A feast for the senses and a perfect representation of Spring. Simply superb! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~ Susan
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 12:50:00 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 4/19/2021 7:05:00 AM
I am delighted to read about the azaleas blooming. I think they are so awesome and add such a nice touch to a yard. The hummers fascinate me every year. Pollen makes me sick every year some years worse than others. Your visit to my page cracked me up. Sara
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 12:49:00 PM
Glad I could make you smile, Sara! Thank you for commenting!
Date: 4/17/2021 8:59:00 PM
lovely Haiku, Kim. Your poems complement the season.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 12:48:00 PM
Thank you, Harry!
Date: 4/17/2021 8:24:00 PM
Ah, so very nice, Kim. Well, I think it should place very near the top, but who am I to say? Anyway, it's a fine, delicate sequence of haiku.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 12:48:00 PM
Thank you, Milton!