Kim Merryman Poet Haiku

Spring Haiku Sequence

azalea blossoms
fuchsia, pink, white, red --
bees are buzzing

hummingbird flutters
near backyard feeder--
hello again

pollen in the air
allergies are flaring--
warmer days and nights

4/17/21
For M.L. Kiser's
Spring Haiku sequence contest

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Aniruddha Pathak June 27, 2021 at 4:39 AM A beautiful string of haikus on spring, a winning one, congrats....so late

Frances Schiavina May 7, 2021 at 7:14 AM Best congratulations on your winning beautiful descriptive poem Kim Merryman May 8, 2021 at 12:03 PM Thank you, Frances!

Anisha Dutta April 30, 2021 at 11:03 AM NICE FLOW. Congrats to win. Love. Kim Merryman May 3, 2021 at 6:46 PM Thank you, Anisha!

Juliet Ligon April 28, 2021 at 8:43 AM Beautiful, inviting haiku chain. Congratulations! Kim Merryman May 3, 2021 at 6:45 PM Thank you, Juliet!

Kim Rodrigues April 27, 2021 at 4:58 PM Great imagery! Congratulations, Kim! Kim Merryman May 3, 2021 at 6:45 PM Thank you, Kim!

Jan Allison April 27, 2021 at 4:50 PM what a lovely string of haiku, many congrats Kim:-) hugs jan xx Kim Merryman May 3, 2021 at 6:45 PM Thank you, Jan!

Andrea Dietrich April 27, 2021 at 2:21 PM a lovely sequence, dear. Congrats on the big win!! Kim Merryman May 3, 2021 at 6:44 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Paula Goldsmith April 27, 2021 at 10:53 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful spring haiku. I was there. Have a blessed day................................... Kim Merryman May 3, 2021 at 6:44 PM Thank you, Paula!

Mystic Rose Rose April 27, 2021 at 10:10 AM Beautiful Kim, congrats on your win, glad springtime is here, I appreciated your visit on my page, thank you :) Kim Merryman May 3, 2021 at 6:44 PM Thank you, Vie!

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 26, 2021 at 8:42 PM Wonderful imagery amid delightful spring sensations! Congratulations, Kim. Best wishes, Evelyn Kim Merryman May 3, 2021 at 6:43 PM Thank you, Evelyn!

John Lawless April 26, 2021 at 3:14 PM Kim, you're making Spring blush with these cleverly colorful images Kim Merryman May 3, 2021 at 6:42 PM Thank you, John!

Sam Kauffman April 26, 2021 at 11:29 AM If I just heard a sneeze - bless you! Such a delightful picture of spring. Love the humor in your third haiku! Congratulations and blessings for your allergies! Kim Merryman May 3, 2021 at 6:42 PM I have been sneezing a bit. Thank you for commenting, Sam!

Christuraj Alex April 26, 2021 at 11:11 AM Congratulations! Kim Merryman May 3, 2021 at 6:41 PM Thank you!

Howard Kerr April 22, 2021 at 7:27 AM Hi Kim, A splendid sequence of colour and imagery. Unsurpassable. Thanks for Robots award which I cherish and your insights on this work Howard Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 12:50 PM Thank you, Howard and you are welcome!

Susan Ashley April 19, 2021 at 7:41 AM Dear Kim, your haiku strand are vivid and vibrant with color, movement and life! A feast for the senses and a perfect representation of Spring. Simply superb! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~ Susan Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 12:50 PM Thank you, Susan!

Sara Kendrick April 19, 2021 at 7:05 AM I am delighted to read about the azaleas blooming. I think they are so awesome and add such a nice touch to a yard. The hummers fascinate me every year. Pollen makes me sick every year some years worse than others. Your visit to my page cracked me up. Sara Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 12:49 PM Glad I could make you smile, Sara! Thank you for commenting!

Harry Horsman April 17, 2021 at 8:59 PM lovely Haiku, Kim. Your poems complement the season. Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 12:48 PM Thank you, Harry!

L Milton Hankins April 17, 2021 at 8:24 PM Ah, so very nice, Kim. Well, I think it should place very near the top, but who am I to say? Anyway, it's a fine, delicate sequence of haiku. Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 12:48 PM Thank you, Milton!