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Spring Haiku

SPRING HAIKU April snow offering a fresh canvas ……Jonquils…….spring’s rebuttal soft bunny ears hide among the tulips ……pink nose…..red petals garter snakes slither slowly searching for the sun ………… warm stone beckons ©4/16/2021

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Date: 5/13/2021 3:58:00 PM
Hello John Lawless, this year April had a chill. With a lite sprinkle of snow. Unusual for April. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 4/27/2021 4:48:00 PM
what a charming string of poems, love the formatting John:-) many congrats, hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/27/2021 4:47:00 PM
Love the imagery, John! Congratulations!
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Date: 4/27/2021 3:07:00 PM
Creative haiku chain. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/27/2021 2:21:00 PM
wow, YOURS are incredible. I am so glad to share a number one spot with these!! Congrats, John.
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Date: 4/27/2021 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, John. I like "spring's rebuttal."
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Date: 4/26/2021 6:33:00 PM
Fantastic images in your haiku, John! I like the way you formatted them, also. Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/26/2021 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 4/16/2021 8:57:00 PM
Wonderful haiku series. I love how the garter snake seeks out a warm stone to bask on. I used to have a gopher snake as a pet.
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