Spring Green

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spring green dots the hills contrasted by deep pine green.... high voltage power

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/13/2021 8:04:00 PM

Ooh! Nothing more powerful than Mother Nature's 'High Voltage,' Sara. Superb turn of phrase here. Kudos, Gershon

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/13/2021 11:03:00 PM

Gershon, Thanks..Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/12/2021 12:17:00 AM

Great power in your haiku.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/12/2021 4:16:00 AM

Victor, Thanks for the chuckle. I would not want to be around a live fallen wire. Your presence is always welcomed. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/11/2021 2:52:00 PM

Your photo I see in your words--well done, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/12/2021 4:01:00 AM

Vijay, Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/11/2021 2:41:00 PM

Hi Sara, Your haiku described the photo very well. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/12/2021 3:46:00 AM

Alexis, Thanks for the visit. Internet photo. I could not or did not find one to match my thoughts as we road along and the woods were dotted with spring green trees so many different shades then there was those high voltage power lines. Sara