Spring Gathering

Aluminum cans 
Filled with everything
From lemonade to beer

Red table
Topped with everything
From cookies to deer

Kids
Of all ages
From 0 to 60

Activities
Of all sorts
From sitting to Fairy Pixie

Dogs 
Different types
From Terrier to Great Dane

Noises
All sounds
From laughter to screaming in pain

Smells
All scents
From baby poop to wet grass

It’s a picnic
So fun!
It’s a fun-fun mass
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 4:58 PM
This is so uplifting, Alli! A great reflection on a neighborhood picnic.
Wilson Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 3:12 PM
Such a lot going on here Alli. I think I'll drive straight past and go to a nice quiet lake, just hope the dogs don't find me. Leon
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