Spring Frolics

spring frolics

bursting blossoms bloom
 floral quilt in rainbow hues ~
  sun wears dark glasses

3/28/21
Contest: Spring Haiku
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Syllable Counter 5 7 5 17 syllables
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Wolf Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 5:54 PM
Ha, ha! This is SO cute! I can just picture it. -- Like Lolita! :) gw
Kauffman Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 9:20 AM
Saucy and a little racy with a wink and a smile! Thank you so much Gershon! Here' to finding those "shades" we put away for winter :)"
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 5:22 PM
back with my congrats on one of my favorites in the contest.
Kauffman Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 9:18 AM
Ahhh! Thank you my friend. I feel honored. For me, Spring just wants to have fun. I wanted to capture her sauciness! Hope you are doing well. Sending you blessings and prayers.
Allison Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 12:18 PM
many congrats on your win this is so delightful Sam:-) hugs Jan xx
Kauffman Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 9:15 AM
Thank you so much Jan! Thought of your delightful sense of humor when writing this haiku. It inspired me! Sending you blessings and a hug :)"
Merryman Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 12:10 PM
A delightful haiku, Sam! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Kauffman Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Hi Kim! Thank you! Just had to have a little fun with spring! Hope you have a wonderful Easter. Blessings to you :)"
Kitchin Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 7:40 AM
Sam, congratulations on your bronze placement with your creative haiku!
Kauffman Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 11:42 AM
Thank you Tania! This one was such fun to imagine. So grateful for your placement and your continued contributions to the soup! Hope you had a wonderful Easter f illed with much joy!
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 4:29 PM
wow, this is so cool, and that last line was a really cute twist.
Kauffman Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 11:44 AM
So glad you liked this spring offering, Andrea. Your wonderful messages always put a little "spring" in my step! Hope you had a wonderful Easter. Sending you blessings of joy!
Gauthier Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 12:54 PM
Delightful, Sam. I particularly love your use of 'quilt' here and your last line ~
Kauffman Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 11:46 AM
Thank you so much Line for your delightful message. Imaging this haiku was such a fun experience - especially the last line. Hope you had a wonderful Easter. Sending blessings of joy and hope.
Sands Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 12:03 PM
I enjoyed this fun Haiku. Nice one :)
Kauffman Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 11:08 AM
Hi Heidi! I am so happy you enjoyed this haiku with its bit of fun. Was such fun to write. Hope you are continuing to do well and that you had a wonderful holiday. Sending you blessings of joy.
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