Smita Kulkarni Poet Rhyme

Spring Forward

In the quiet dawn of March,
When winter relaxes its cold grip,
The daylight stretches its arms,
While serving a dynamic delight. 

The sun, shining vibrantly, 
decorates the sky with hues of hope,
Clocks leap forward eagerly,
And daffodils happily endorse.

Daisies roll out wispy vows,
Their petals, intricate art pieces,
Cherry blossoms’ fancy bows,
Dance intensely with the spring breezes.

Birdsongs jingle the mornings,
A symphony of joy and rebirth,
Old wisdom is whispering,
To initiate and leap forward.

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Laura Leiser May 30, 2024 at 6:45 PM Your verse captures the hopeful beginnings is spring so nicely, Smita. Enjoyed this! :) Smita Kulkarni October 15, 2024 at 12:42 PM Thank you, Laura!

Triny Xiang April 15, 2024 at 6:30 PM You capture Spring with such delicate wisdom. Spring forward has never been penned so lyrically. I look forward to your poetry when Fall falls back. Smita Kulkarni April 22, 2024 at 9:44 AM So sweet of you Triny to leave such an inspiring comment! I will definitely try to write one on "Fall Back" as you have suggested here. Thank you!

Joseph May March 19, 2024 at 6:52 AM Beautiful write of Spring's delight.. enjoyed Smita Kulkarni March 19, 2024 at 12:16 PM Thanks for your comment, Joshep, much appreciated!

Ink Empress March 19, 2024 at 6:01 AM Dear smita, im blown away by your descriptive language. So soulfully moving. the way you personify and bring nature alive through metaphors and artistic imagery truly is impeccable. I especially love the way youv written “ The sun, shining vibrantly, decorates the sky with hues of hope, Clocks leap forward eagerly, And daffodils happily endorse.” how gorgeous and fitting for right now too. “ Cherry blossoms’ fancy bows, Dance intensely with the spring breezes.” Love that! A fave this is! Smita Kulkarni March 19, 2024 at 12:19 PM Spring's decor is so gorgeous that it stirs the poet inside me. Glad that you enjoyed the description of my spring hues, Ink. You yourself is such a great poetess, I enjoy reading your poetry. Thank you for stopping by!

Christina Bowring March 18, 2024 at 12:33 PM Dear Smita, your spring poem is a joy to read. Love all the beautifully written poetic lines but especially the third stanza. Exquisite. You’ve highlighted my favourite season so well and captured so much of its glory. This is a delightful pleasure to read. Thank you for putting a smile on my face as we embrace spring. Hope you have a wonderful one. Blessings to you :):) Smita Kulkarni March 19, 2024 at 12:24 PM Thank you, dear Christina for bringing a smile to my face with your uplifting comments. Spring is such a lovely time of the year, and it has a magic of creating my thoughts and words into lovely poems. I appreciate nature and its beauty. Thanks for your visit.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2024 at 1:07 PM - A wonderful time ... and a lovely poem, Smita :) - Smita Kulkarni March 18, 2024 at 9:29 AM So nice of you Anne-Lise to drop by!

Victor Buhagiar March 14, 2024 at 11:44 AM Dawn and sunsets are my favorite time of the day. They both are so colourful. Your poem on dawn is excellent.