Jean Murray Poet Haiku

Spring Explosion

in holi holi
          colours explode like a bomb
                     drench me in spring's birth.


30/03/2019
HAIKU on the theme of spring explosion. 
  for Maureen McGreavy

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Jan Allison May 3, 2019 at 1:50 PM what a vibrant poem Jean!:-) hugs Jan xx Jean Murray May 3, 2019 at 2:06 PM I love your hugs!

Andrea Dietrich April 5, 2019 at 8:43 PM See, you won, and I didn't. haha (regarding what you said to my comment below) Congrats on your well deserved win. Jean Murray April 6, 2019 at 3:20 AM Yes Andrea. I see "I came, I saw and I conquered!" LOL. I searched for your name. Commiserations.

Line Gauthier April 3, 2019 at 9:43 PM Congrats on your win, Jean. Jean Murray April 4, 2019 at 2:18 AM Thank you Line.

Eve Roper April 3, 2019 at 9:42 PM Beautiful imagery and well written Haiku, Jean, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`* Jean Murray April 4, 2019 at 2:18 AM Thank you Eve.

Arturo Michael March 31, 2019 at 11:21 AM In holi holi...I like that....Happy Spring... Jean Murray March 31, 2019 at 3:48 PM So far so good Arturo. It's mother's day in Ireland today. My three intrepid daughters, one in England and two in Canada remembered to phone me. Although alone, I feel blessed this evening.

Tom Cunningham March 31, 2019 at 12:36 AM Well thought out Jean, lovely hakiu. Good luck. Tom Jean Murray March 31, 2019 at 1:11 AM Thank you Tom.

Andrea Dietrich March 30, 2019 at 8:22 PM oh wow, yours is so good. Wish I had written a better one like this! Jean Murray March 31, 2019 at 1:08 AM I blush to think I could write anything better than you Andrea. I'm sure that's not true but thank you for saying so.

Connie Marcum Wong March 30, 2019 at 7:54 PM Stunning Jean! I think this spring is more welcome than ever considering the winter we have had all over this year. : ) xxoo Jean Murray March 31, 2019 at 1:05 AM Like midwives, we can't wait Conni after that heavily pregnant winter.

Silent One March 30, 2019 at 5:24 PM I like what you did here.. very cultural.. Jean Murray March 30, 2019 at 5:44 PM Thank you Silent. I have missed the festival by a week but those colours I will never forget.