Spring Explosion

in holi holi
          colours explode like a bomb
                     drench me in spring's birth.


30/03/2019
HAIKU on the theme of spring explosion. 
  for Maureen McGreavy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 5/3/2019 1:50:00 PM
what a vibrant poem Jean!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/3/2019 2:06:00 PM
I love your hugs!
Date: 4/5/2019 8:43:00 PM
See, you won, and I didn't. haha (regarding what you said to my comment below) Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/6/2019 3:20:00 AM
Yes Andrea. I see "I came, I saw and I conquered!" LOL. I searched for your name. Commiserations.
Date: 4/3/2019 9:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jean.
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/4/2019 2:18:00 AM
Thank you Line.
Date: 4/3/2019 9:42:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and well written Haiku, Jean, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/4/2019 2:18:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 3/31/2019 11:21:00 AM
In holi holi...I like that....Happy Spring...
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Jean Murray
Date: 3/31/2019 3:48:00 PM
So far so good Arturo. It's mother's day in Ireland today. My three intrepid daughters, one in England and two in Canada remembered to phone me. Although alone, I feel blessed this evening.
Date: 3/31/2019 12:36:00 AM
Well thought out Jean, lovely hakiu. Good luck. Tom
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Jean Murray
Date: 3/31/2019 1:11:00 AM
Thank you Tom.
Date: 3/30/2019 8:22:00 PM
oh wow, yours is so good. Wish I had written a better one like this!
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Jean Murray
Date: 3/31/2019 1:08:00 AM
I blush to think I could write anything better than you Andrea. I'm sure that's not true but thank you for saying so.
Date: 3/30/2019 7:54:00 PM
Stunning Jean! I think this spring is more welcome than ever considering the winter we have had all over this year. : ) xxoo
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Jean Murray
Date: 3/31/2019 1:05:00 AM
Like midwives, we can't wait Conni after that heavily pregnant winter.
Date: 3/30/2019 5:24:00 PM
I like what you did here.. very cultural..
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Jean Murray
Date: 3/30/2019 5:44:00 PM
Thank you Silent. I have missed the festival by a week but those colours I will never forget.
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