Spring Dawn Chorus

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Spring Monoku Contest

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In springtime, the harmoniuos chirping of the birds awakens me.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/26/2025 10:13:00 AM

Yes ~ awakens in many ways ~ charming

Marilene Evans
Date: 6/4/2025 7:46:00 PM

Thank you, Line! Appreciate it. Sorry for the late response. Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2025 2:26:00 AM

- The beauty of spring, thank you for this beautiful picture, Marilene :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest -:) - hugs

Marilene Evans
Date: 6/4/2025 7:45:00 PM

Thank you, thank you, Anne-Lise. Pardon me for being late to respond. Hugs, M.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2025 9:56:00 PM

Cute one, Marilene. Congrats

Marilene Evans
Date: 6/4/2025 7:43:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea. My apology for getting back so late. Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/17/2025 9:09:00 AM

- Really beautifully written, Marilene :) - hugs

Marilene Evans
Date: 5/22/2025 2:36:00 PM

Anne-Lise, thank you so much. Apologize for responding so late. Hugs, M.