Spring Closure

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A little scion toward spring closing. It's just opening the calm atmosphere. It will soon bloom in all its exposing. A little scion toward spring closing. In the warm glow of summer imposing. Our hearts tell of views we stifle appear. A little scion toward spring closing. It's just opening the calm atmosphere. Written: May 14, 2023

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Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 5/15/2023 3:03:00 PM

Oh, I love this Sotto, had me meandering on a sunny happy memory of long ago! I live in a hot climate, so, memories of closing spring and approaching summer leads me back to my early childhood to where we lived in a cooler summer. I don't so look forward to summer where I live now (think driving with oven mitts on the steering wheel when the car is left in the sun). I think summer where you live sounds quite beautiful 'just opening the calm atmosphere', simply lovely.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/15/2023 1:52:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing it. I had forgotten what scion did mean. A good reminder. Your visits to my page always uplifting. Sara

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/14/2023 6:28:00 PM

calm springs and summers are the best, thanks for the excellent triolet, and talented poetry

Jan Allison

Date: 5/14/2023 12:28:00 PM

what a delightful triolet Sotto:-) hugs Jan xx