Spring Cleaning Ps

What are you stewing?
Please take out your trash before
it takes over you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A   Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 4:55 PM
Su,, , enjoyed stopping by once again ;-)~ Hope you are having a joyous holiday. Take care ~PD
Chappell Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 6:06 PM
like this my friend
Kopp Avatar
November 18, 2010 at 12:22 PM
vry good advice sue...Nice write
Strand Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 12:27 AM
We have been doing that as well this Summer. Sue.Difficult for some of us with a 40's upbringing.Rgds Brian
Gumbo Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 9:27 PM
freaking brilliant... you speak to me Sister. x
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June 28, 2010 at 8:23 AM
A lot of truth in your Senryu Sue. Thank you for your kind comments. I did know about the spelling mistake but did not have time to correct it. Thought I could get back to it but didn't. Appreciate pointing it out as I hate spelling mistakes also. God Bless Phyl
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June 28, 2010 at 2:34 AM
great Senryu, excellent Harry
A   Avatar
June 27, 2010 at 8:03 PM
LOL,, the smell of spring cleaning,, not so good all the time. Well i guess I got to get myself Summer cleaning soon. Enjoyed your poem once again Mrs. Sue,..p.d.
Mehta Avatar
June 27, 2010 at 7:21 PM
A nice senryu nicely worded
Guzzi Avatar
June 27, 2010 at 2:30 PM
Dear Sue....you have more than enough time to write your verse "The Teachers" I will add your name PROUDLY!
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June 27, 2010 at 1:35 PM
Got a chuckle out of this one. So much truth to your words. Thank you for sharing your humor with us and for your kind comment. Karen
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June 27, 2010 at 1:14 PM
You said: " Curious about the first word in the second line ." - Fins of imagination - I meant underwater "wings" of imagination (like a fish... or mermaid...) It must be the closeness to the Pacific :) Great Senryu here, dear Sue. Just yesterday I "took out some trash" and blocked it :) Love, Iolanda
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