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Spring Butterflies

fair dandelions
vision swaddle in rain drops
comely butterflies 

3/27/2021
Poetry Contest: Spring Haiku traditional form
  Tania Kitchin

naturehaiku

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David Smith

April 7, 2021 at 11:16 PM

We have had a of butterflies here this year. Sometimes 3 lines is all it takes if the poet knows their stuff or in this instance spring. Sorry I have not read your post for a while but really good to know you are still posting. Best regards David in NZ

Sara Kendrick

April 7, 2021 at 4:05 PM

Enjoyed reading your very descriptive lines about spring and summer plants and happenings. Thanks for the visit to my page with a kind review. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

April 5, 2021 at 5:16 PM

Congrats to you, Eve. So good again to see.

Kim Merryman

April 5, 2021 at 11:50 AM

Creative imagery, Eve! Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Jan Allison

April 5, 2021 at 11:44 AM

delightful haiku Eve, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

April 5, 2021 at 8:59 AM

Congratulations on your win. I love dandelions, butterflies and this spring write. Have a blessed day/week...............

Joseph May

April 4, 2021 at 10:25 AM

Beautiful write Eve, Congrats on your win..

Tania Kitchin

April 4, 2021 at 7:18 AM

Eve, congratulations on your first place win with your gorgeous haiku!

Richard Lamoureux

March 28, 2021 at 10:16 PM

You are so good at these short forms. Well done and all the best in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich

March 28, 2021 at 2:22 PM

what a gem this is, Eve!

Quoth Theraven

March 28, 2021 at 12:15 PM

Eve, Love it, bring Spring in fine poetry. The wild dandelions were never a troublesome weed to me.., just ask any bee. The Painted Lady's are surely on their way. -Richard