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Spring Breeze

Spring breeze softly perches On the same branch in the tree Next to a little bird

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/22/2024 6:53:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Howard Kerr

Date: 3/10/2021 2:24:00 PM

Hi Rituko, Awe-inspiring Haiku. Thanks for your review of my work Howard

Rituko Shindo
Date: 3/14/2021 4:14:00 PM

Thank you for your comments. I'll vist you again.