Spring break

a crocus fighting for its day in the sun



AP: 3rd placed 2025

Submitted on May 20, 2025 for contest SPRING MONOKU sponsored by JCB BRUL - RANKED 1ST

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Malabika Ray Choudhury

May 27, 2025 at 6:31 PM

So beautiful, the picture and the Monoku. Congratulations, Dear Line.

Line Gauthier

May 28, 2025 at 4:10 PM

Thank you very much, Malabika ~

Trina Layne

May 26, 2025 at 1:21 PM

Congrats to you as well! Your pieces are always delicate and warming.

Line Gauthier

May 26, 2025 at 5:51 PM

Thank you so much, Trina. Most appreciated ~

Kim Rodrigues

May 26, 2025 at 12:19 PM

Congrats!

Line Gauthier

May 26, 2025 at 5:51 PM

Thanks, Kim ~ have a lovely day

Howard Kerr

May 26, 2025 at 10:35 AM

Congratulations Line on your win with this stoic tale of survival, a flower’s quest for sunshine. Thanks for reading my entry and your comment on it Howard

Line Gauthier

May 26, 2025 at 5:50 PM

Thank you very much, Howard ~ much appreciated