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Spring Bows To Summer

spring bows to summer spring bows to summer long nights give way to daylight ~ footprints on the sand cold days nod to warmth days comes early then leave late ~ shooting star pizzazz frost curtseys to dew empty fields burst with blossoms ~ bird songs fill the dawn tree buds smile with leaves barren limbs expand with life ~ forest greenness thrives moonlight swaddles night moon shadows dance in rondeaus ~ summer bows to spring 6-8-22

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/10/2022 8:46:00 AM

Hi Sam as your Spring bows to Summer and the days get longer and warmer our Autumn bows to Winter and our days get shorter and colder. and so it will remain for as long as Planet Earth is allowed to live! love your Seasonal poem and wish you a happy Summers day Sam my friend. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/17/2022 11:35:00 AM

Hi Jennifer! Please forgive my late response! I couldn't remember which one of your lovely messages I had not responded to earlier this month! Please accept my heartfelt gratitude for your beautiful message. Like you I'm concerned for our big blue marble in the sky. Keeping it safe is our stewardship from God. I am so happy you enjoyed this seasonal romp - truly a dance of life! Summer has been a little frenetic but I am enjoying the long days and warm weather knowing that fall will soon be upon us as it is upon you. Sending you autumnal blessings dear friend.

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/9/2022 1:12:00 PM

Amazing Sam, how we wait for one good haiku to come along, then you send us a whole bunch of them, each tying in with the next, what a masterful twist to juxtapose start and finish, brilliant, cheers David

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/11/2022 11:44:00 AM

I am deeply honored by your uplifting message David. Thank you many times over. I kept seeing the seasons connected in a rondeau dance. I believe "the soup" has both taught me about and encouraged me to try my hand at haiku - a poetry form I have come to both admire and love! It looks so simple yet the challenge is in the simplicity! I am so happy you enjoyed this haiku string. Have to give Tom Cunningham credit for teaching me about haiku strings. His are brilliant! All the best. Cheers!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/9/2022 6:03:00 AM

Mind blowing, beautiful Haikus! What talent you display. I am HH.l.haiku handicapped)))) Panagiota

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/9/2022 10:16:00 AM

Pangie, thank you ever so much! It has taken me a long time to learn to write haiku. I blush when I look at my first attempts. Have learned to love crafting them. I have a feeling with your talent for sharp imagery and precise language that you could write some amazing haiku! Hope you are doing well - continued healing! Hugs and blessings to you my friend. Looks like we're going to get a couple of very hot days! Stay cool!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2022 4:35:00 PM

this is very cool and how you made the ending similar to the beginning. I especially liked frost curtsying.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/9/2022 10:10:00 AM

Andrea, thank you so much! I just couldn't get the image of a dance of the seasons out of my mind - a vivacious, courtly dance. I am so glad that translated into the haiku string! Blessings!

Len Gasun

Date: 6/8/2022 1:04:00 AM

Wow! A superb write with fantastic image my dear friend Sam. Congratualtions on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing! God bless. Hugs

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/8/2022 10:27:00 AM

Thank you dear friend! A lovely surprise to find this haiku string on the winners list. Had fun thinking about spring and summer dancing through the season. I'm so glad you enjoyed the dance. Blessings of peace and joy to you!

Carol Mitra

Date: 6/7/2022 7:40:00 PM

Excellent take dear Sam....loved the poem....Congrats on your win do take care :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/8/2022 10:25:00 AM

Thank you so much Carol! This was a fun haiku string thinking about the dance of spring and summer and the way it touches all of us! Blessings of the season to you.!

Eve Roper

Date: 6/7/2022 2:14:00 PM

Sam, great imagery.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/7/2022 5:37:00 PM

Thank you my friend! Blessings! Also sending gratitude to you. Re-read the poem and found typos! :#