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Spring Bounce

squishy sodden miles footfalls bounce Spring waters my feet

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/21/2015 2:12:00 AM

A great haiku, Kimberly! I had a classmate in elementary school named Kimberly Shaw. I always think of her when I visit your poems...hugs, Rhonda

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/21/2015 7:56:00 AM

Hi Rhonda! Isnt that a coincidence! Thank you for stopping by with such kind comments. Warm hugs, Kimberly

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2015 10:50:00 PM

ooohhh I really likes this one!!!

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/21/2015 7:54:00 AM

Hi Andrea! Thank you so much for the encouragement. Warm hugs, Kimberly

Jan Allison

Date: 3/20/2015 1:30:00 PM

beautiful haiku and having read your comment below - what a delightful idea Kimberly to something I have ever heard of:-) Hugs jan xx

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/20/2015 1:42:00 PM

Yes, I can remember many sloshy walks to school before the sidewalks were poured! Thank you for the kind comments. Hugs, Kimberly xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/20/2015 11:43:00 AM

I can feel the squishy sod under my feet! Such a descriptive write in 3 lines, Kim. A 7. Hugs and smiles from the isles! Kim :)

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/20/2015 11:52:00 AM

The annual soggy feet parade here in central Canada once the snow melts off of the lawns and pathways! Thank you so much for your very kind encouragement, and the 7, Kim! Warm hugs, Kimberly