Spring Birds-Hc

one red cardinal
sings to two goldfinches, as
three spring robins prance

One bright red cardinal sings his two spring mating songs
as goldfinches watch three robins prance, signs winter is gone

2/26/19

CharlieKucoup Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Roper Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 1:43 PM
Congratulations on a great Haiku & Couplet, Tania, :) . ... Hugs Eve ~`*
Kitchin Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 3:30 PM
Thank you Eve!
Andresen Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 4:35 AM
- Congratulations on your win :) -
Kitchin Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 4:47 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 3:14 PM
Back with my congrats, dear.
Kitchin Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 4:35 PM
Thank you Andrea!
Messina Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 2:22 PM
Lovely spring write, Tania. Just a few more weeks till winter is gone! Great poem. Congratulations on your win... Charlie :)
Kitchin Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 4:34 PM
Thank you and thank you for my placement in your contest!
Allison Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 2:36 AM
what a charming springtime poem Tania, would love to see cardinals we don't have them over here:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 4:21 AM
Thank you Jan!
Kendrick Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 1:40 PM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for dropping by.. I appreciate the honor of placing in your contest. Sara
Kitchin Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 2:03 PM
Thank you Sara!
Callus Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 10:47 AM
Singing and dancing bring this lovely image to life, Tania! Spring can have the same effect. Regards // paul
Kitchin Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:15 PM
Thank you Paul!
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 6:06 PM
excellent one for spring's coming!! Nicely done, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 8:11 PM
Thank you Andrea!
Andresen Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 1:19 PM
- Lovely written, Tania ... the same theme as mine :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 4:24 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
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