Notes About The Poem

Written 3/22/26 for the Poetry Contest sponsored by JCB Brul.

spring bees

                            VVVVVVVVV
                          /    @@@ @  \
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                      /____  \\\ ***/// ___ \             busy bumble bees
                           \\\00"00"///                      frolic among the tulips ~
                             \\"0000"//                  (!)(!)          spring procreation
                               \\"00"//           / : \   (* *)   /:  \               
                                  @@             / : \ (^)0(^) /: \          / VVVVV  \
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                           (# ) @@( # )                ((0))                     \\"00"//       
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 9:45 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "spring bees" fun/creative write again. What fun shapes you have here. Have a great day writing away with your win...........
Kitchin Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 2:25 PM
Paula, thank you.
Daniels Avatar
March 26, 2026 at 9:54 PM
Awesome Illusku > takes time & patience these Illusku’s. Such hardworking insects are bees, but then most insects are, in their own way. X.
Kitchin Avatar
March 27, 2026 at 6:29 AM
Ghairo, thank you.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 26, 2026 at 8:32 AM
HOW MARVELOUS! I see them frolicking. What a magnificent sight! I love it, dearest Tania!
Kitchin Avatar
March 26, 2026 at 1:02 PM
Demetrios, thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2026 at 12:56 PM
Wow. I was gonna do bees for mine too. I was noticing there are instructions on Google on how to construct them. Did you follow some designs? I sure hope I can figure it out. Well done
Kitchin Avatar
March 22, 2026 at 2:51 PM
Andrea, no, I just came up with my own design. It is challenging and I hope it looks like tulips and a bee in the middle.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 22, 2026 at 11:24 AM
Your "spring bees" is a fun/creative ~ write/shapes. Love This One. "Good Luck" I did, "Pretty Spring Flowers Are Everywhere." Have a great day writing away............
Kitchin Avatar
March 22, 2026 at 11:58 AM
Paula, thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 22, 2026 at 9:34 AM
Did I feel a sting somewhere?
Kitchin Avatar
March 22, 2026 at 11:58 AM
Victor, thanks for your visit.
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