Maurice Yvonne Poet Acrostic

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Spring

Stunningly dressed, stirring in her crib, spring awakens.
Plants and animals ready for the princesses arrival.
Rolling  waves of aviators, nippers, roamers scurry all.
In turn blooming blossoms, blossoming blooms flavor froth the air.
Nourishing rays, falling rains provide the infant sustenance.
Gathered, gleeful the first born takes her seasoned throne.


Maurice Yvonne
10/01/2014

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 12, 2014 at 10:18 AM Wonderful acrostic Maurice! The last line especially I love the most! Congrats on huge win!

Dr.Ram Mehta October 12, 2014 at 1:21 AM Beautiful imagery, Maurice, congrats on the win.

Brenda Meier-Hans October 11, 2014 at 9:50 PM I knew this was a keeper. Congratulations on your winning poem Maurice. You are like a fine Bordeaux, just gets better with time.

Andrea Dietrich October 11, 2014 at 5:38 PM OMG, I just saw the list again. Yours was the ONLY spring winner!!! and there was only one summer too. Maurice Yvonne October 11, 2014 at 5:58 PM I know I was the only spring, that's why mine was the best of the spring ones on the winners list.

Andrea Dietrich October 11, 2014 at 5:36 PM Hey I was right what I said to you. Charlotte revealed in her blog that she got hardly any spring poems and it was one of her favorite seasons of all. CONGRATS you had the best of the spring poems. Maurice Yvonne October 11, 2014 at 5:56 PM I am just glad to spring back from my recent losses.

Jan Allison October 11, 2014 at 5:04 PM dropping back with my congrats Maurice:-) Hugs jan xxx

Charlotte Puddifoot October 11, 2014 at 4:23 PM lots to love about this one - another brilliant personification of a season; I loved the alliteration and word play in that fourth line...I just felt the lines were a little long, maybe...? but for that, it may well have been a 1st place - congrats on your win in my contest :) Maurice Yvonne October 11, 2014 at 4:56 PM Thank you so much for such a high rating and the constructive suggestions. I am definitely going to take your learned advise and rewrite it. I think you are right again thank you so much for your kindness.

Paul Callus October 6, 2014 at 9:09 AM Hi Maurice...I was going to write about spring, but after this I don't have much new material left to make one! Love your imagery and would not mind borrowing that pen of yours! In my eyes this is already a winner. // paul (a 7 rating)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 3, 2014 at 8:19 AM i love your R Maurice.. :) beautiful imagery plus roll of words.. :) I love the spring season among all... it is short but well its full of life.. :D!!!! and the philosophical meaning underneath that word also.. :)soupmail!!!

Andrea Dietrich October 2, 2014 at 11:24 PM This is a sweet one on spring. You are one of the few I see doing spring so I think you have a great shot of getting placed. I gotta hurry and get mine up!! Great job!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2014 at 12:08 PM - This is so beautiful - Spring is my favorite season and the most beautiful time of the year - Good luck in the contest, Maurice !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Maurice Yvonne October 2, 2014 at 12:16 PM thank you beautiful Anne-Lise.

Liam Mcdaid October 2, 2014 at 6:53 AM smiling pal singing beautiful piece Maurice Yvonne October 2, 2014 at 12:14 PM I love you poetry liam.

Demetrios Trifiatis October 2, 2014 at 3:53 AM A lullaby for the soul expressed in images supreme, mon ami Maurice! ! Maurice Yvonne October 2, 2014 at 5:02 AM thank you kind sir.

Tim Smith October 1, 2014 at 6:32 PM Love your take on this...dang I have to stop that sleep thing...now I have three hours of catching up to do Maurice Yvonne October 2, 2014 at 5:01 AM I didn't sleep for ten days.......because.......that would have been too long to be sleeping.

Jan Allison October 1, 2014 at 4:31 PM Beautifully penned acrostic with lovely imagery Maurice - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Maurice Yvonne October 1, 2014 at 4:41 PM I hope you are having a good day.

Brenda Meier-Hans October 1, 2014 at 4:28 PM A brilliant poem Maurice. I love what you have done with this Acrostic. Maurice Yvonne October 1, 2014 at 4:41 PM I could kiss you Brenda you are my meter for my posts.

Charmaine Chircop October 1, 2014 at 3:52 PM I will visit Cas blog.Tnks for sharing the link.Sje s an amazing poet,and so are you with this beauty.Charma Maurice Yvonne October 1, 2014 at 4:03 PM Thank you Char I think it is so nice that people are taking the time to visit Casarah's Blog.

Casarah Nance October 1, 2014 at 3:39 PM This does put a spring in my step, lovely images my friend, and thanks for the link. a shameless plug, I would be very happy to have everyone visit me at casarah.altervista.org . Thanks for your nice words :) hugsxxx Casarah Nance October 1, 2014 at 4:19 PM lol any position is fine by me, as long as I am on it Maurice Yvonne October 1, 2014 at 3:55 PM I just got the update on your blog from Andrea who is at the moment right below me. I love being on top...you know like in contests and stuff. Like the top of the list...

Andrea Dietrich October 1, 2014 at 3:37 PM I finally saw her blog. That was very sweet of you to advertise it, and I saw she was showing her "it's wet" poem, etc. She is quite a woman! Jan Allison October 1, 2014 at 4:44 PM Tim wrote its hard,then another called its soft, Cas did its wet... so I wrote 'anticipation' Andrea - do visit if you've not seen it already lol:-) hugs Jan xxx Maurice Yvonne October 1, 2014 at 3:50 PM She is quite a woman, I love who Cas is.