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Spring

Stunningly dressed, stirring in her crib, spring awakens.
Plants and animals ready for the princesses arrival.
Rolling  waves of aviators, nippers, roamers scurry all.
In turn blooming blossoms, blossoming blooms flavor froth the air.
Nourishing rays, falling rains provide the infant sustenance.
Gathered, gleeful the first born takes her seasoned throne.


Maurice Yvonne
10/01/2014

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 10/12/2014 10:18:00 AM Wonderful acrostic Maurice! The last line especially I love the most! Congrats on huge win! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/12/2014 1:21:00 AM Beautiful imagery, Maurice, congrats on the win. Login to Reply

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/11/2014 9:50:00 PM I knew this was a keeper. Congratulations on your winning poem Maurice. You are like a fine Bordeaux, just gets better with time. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/11/2014 5:38:00 PM OMG, I just saw the list again. Yours was the ONLY spring winner!!! and there was only one summer too. Login to Reply Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/11/2014 5:58:00 PM I know I was the only spring, that's why mine was the best of the spring ones on the winners list.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/11/2014 5:36:00 PM Hey I was right what I said to you. Charlotte revealed in her blog that she got hardly any spring poems and it was one of her favorite seasons of all. CONGRATS you had the best of the spring poems. Login to Reply Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/11/2014 5:56:00 PM I am just glad to spring back from my recent losses.

Jan Allison Date: 10/11/2014 5:04:00 PM dropping back with my congrats Maurice:-) Hugs jan xxx Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 10/11/2014 4:23:00 PM lots to love about this one - another brilliant personification of a season; I loved the alliteration and word play in that fourth line...I just felt the lines were a little long, maybe...? but for that, it may well have been a 1st place - congrats on your win in my contest :) Login to Reply Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/11/2014 4:56:00 PM Thank you so much for such a high rating and the constructive suggestions. I am definitely going to take your learned advise and rewrite it. I think you are right again thank you so much for your kindness.

Paul Callus Date: 10/6/2014 9:09:00 AM Hi Maurice...I was going to write about spring, but after this I don't have much new material left to make one! Love your imagery and would not mind borrowing that pen of yours! In my eyes this is already a winner. // paul (a 7 rating) Login to Reply

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/3/2014 8:19:00 AM i love your R Maurice.. :) beautiful imagery plus roll of words.. :) I love the spring season among all... it is short but well its full of life.. :D!!!! and the philosophical meaning underneath that word also.. :)soupmail!!! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/2/2014 11:24:00 PM This is a sweet one on spring. You are one of the few I see doing spring so I think you have a great shot of getting placed. I gotta hurry and get mine up!! Great job! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/2/2014 12:08:00 PM - This is so beautiful - Spring is my favorite season and the most beautiful time of the year - Good luck in the contest, Maurice !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/2/2014 12:16:00 PM thank you beautiful Anne-Lise.

Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/2/2014 6:53:00 AM smiling pal singing beautiful piece Login to Reply Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/2/2014 12:14:00 PM I love you poetry liam.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/2/2014 3:53:00 AM A lullaby for the soul expressed in images supreme, mon ami Maurice! ! Login to Reply Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/2/2014 5:02:00 AM thank you kind sir.

Tim Smith Date: 10/1/2014 6:32:00 PM Love your take on this...dang I have to stop that sleep thing...now I have three hours of catching up to do Login to Reply Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/2/2014 5:01:00 AM I didn't sleep for ten days.......because.......that would have been too long to be sleeping.

Jan Allison Date: 10/1/2014 4:31:00 PM Beautifully penned acrostic with lovely imagery Maurice - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/1/2014 4:41:00 PM I hope you are having a good day.

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/1/2014 4:28:00 PM A brilliant poem Maurice. I love what you have done with this Acrostic. Login to Reply Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/1/2014 4:41:00 PM I could kiss you Brenda you are my meter for my posts.

Charmaine Chircop Date: 10/1/2014 3:52:00 PM I will visit Cas blog.Tnks for sharing the link.Sje s an amazing poet,and so are you with this beauty.Charma Login to Reply Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/1/2014 4:03:00 PM Thank you Char I think it is so nice that people are taking the time to visit Casarah's Blog.

Casarah Nance Date: 10/1/2014 3:39:00 PM This does put a spring in my step, lovely images my friend, and thanks for the link. a shameless plug, I would be very happy to have everyone visit me at casarah.altervista.org . Thanks for your nice words :) hugsxxx Login to Reply Casarah Nance Date: 10/1/2014 4:19:00 PM lol any position is fine by me, as long as I am on it Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/1/2014 3:55:00 PM I just got the update on your blog from Andrea who is at the moment right below me. I love being on top...you know like in contests and stuff. Like the top of the list...

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/1/2014 3:37:00 PM I finally saw her blog. That was very sweet of you to advertise it, and I saw she was showing her "it's wet" poem, etc. She is quite a woman! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/1/2014 4:44:00 PM Tim wrote its hard,then another called its soft, Cas did its wet... so I wrote 'anticipation' Andrea - do visit if you've not seen it already lol:-) hugs Jan xxx Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/1/2014 3:50:00 PM She is quite a woman, I love who Cas is.