Spring

Clouds come circling
Rain runs relentlessly round
Spring shoots start sprouting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Halliday Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 6:29 PM
Nicely done. Watch the grammar though--should be "Spring shoots start sprouting". For a similar haiku, check out my Seedling
Lyle Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 4:33 AM
Thank you Mark for your sharp eye. Your Haiku is excellent by the way thank you for popping by. Andy
Bauer Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 5:58 PM
nice alliteration! very cool!
Lyle Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 4:35 AM
Thank you Ilene for your support its nice to see a familiar face on my page. Andy
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