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Clouds come circling Rain runs relentlessly round Spring shoots start sprouting

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/14/2014 6:29:00 PM
Nicely done. Watch the grammar though--should be "Spring shoots start sprouting". For a similar haiku, check out my Seedling
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 5/16/2014 4:33:00 AM
Thank you Mark for your sharp eye. Your Haiku is excellent by the way thank you for popping by. Andy
Date: 5/14/2014 5:58:00 PM
nice alliteration! very cool!
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 5/16/2014 4:35:00 AM
Thank you Ilene for your support its nice to see a familiar face on my page. Andy

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