Spring

march winds gust -

       gorse clings on tightly
       
       whilst daffodils sway

flowernatureseasonsdaffodilshaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

April 20, 2014 at 11:42 AM

a great one for march!!

Vassilis Comporozos

April 6, 2014 at 4:18 AM

I' ll post it my blog vcobor.blogspot.gr, If you don't have any objection.

Linda Jackson

April 6, 2014 at 8:01 AM

Glad you like it. Best wishes

Vassilis Comporozos

April 6, 2014 at 4:17 AM

spring - like and an authentic hailu, like the ones written by the Japanese. Bravo

Linda Jackson

April 6, 2014 at 8:00 AM

Thank you I try to make a picture.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 5, 2014 at 8:05 AM

- Ohhhh... love it, Linda !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

April 5, 2014 at 7:52 AM

Lovely haiku Linda...you can feel spring in the air. // paul

Jan Allison

April 5, 2014 at 3:44 AM

Fantastic Haiku - love this time of year - you have summed it up perfectly for me with the daffodils and gorse. Hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison

April 16, 2014 at 6:12 AM

Am so pleased you commented back - have been telling hubby about this poem when we were driving over the hills last weekend and the gorse really was 'clinging on' with the last remnants of flowers - now I can make it a favourite! Hugs Jan x

Linda Jackson

April 16, 2014 at 6:06 AM

Thank you x.

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