Spring

Spring

An awakened field, 
Born from the passage of time
Spring, a tranquil dream

naturehaiku

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Nette Onclaud

August 21, 2011 at 5:31 AM

a dance with you on the coming break of spring, ryland.. 2 more seasons to go.. lovely 'ku! :) huggs, nette

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

August 19, 2011 at 2:22 AM

Beautiful Haiku... such a vivid picture painted in so few words.....thanks so much for sharing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ryland Matthews

August 19, 2011 at 2:23 AM

thanks Dr. Mehta, not real sure if that was the proper use of haiku, Spring is my first attempt. let me know if you have any advice please, it wouldbe apreciated