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Spring

Spring An awakened field, Born from the passage of time Spring, a tranquil dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/21/2011 5:31:00 AM
a dance with you on the coming break of spring, ryland.. 2 more seasons to go.. lovely 'ku! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/19/2011 2:22:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku... such a vivid picture painted in so few words.....thanks so much for sharing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ryland Matthews
Date: 8/19/2011 2:23:00 AM
thanks Dr. Mehta, not real sure if that was the proper use of haiku, Spring is my first attempt. let me know if you have any advice please, it wouldbe apreciated
Date: 8/18/2011 1:17:00 PM
Lovely expressions creating nice visual with images, Ryland
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