Spring

Awakening tears
Cascade to the melting pot
Incensed with jack pine

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 23, 2011 at 8:08 PM

Congrats Randy on a fantastic win with these brilliant words luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 22, 2011 at 11:20 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of John, Randy

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 22, 2011 at 10:35 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in John Moses Freeman's contest "Power Of Observation" Randy. Love, Carol

John Freeman

July 22, 2011 at 8:40 AM

Randy, Also with graces provided, you did well in gracing the sponsor. Congratulations on your accomplished endeavor! Agape, Moses

Roxanna Johnson

July 21, 2011 at 10:33 AM

Very beautiful <3

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 18, 2011 at 11:49 AM

an aromatic adventure Randy in this Haiku.. Spring is a lovely season.. beautiful words ...luv..

Stephen Parker

July 18, 2011 at 7:39 AM

A riveting description of encroaching Spring! I love the first line, "Awakening tears". It so aptly describes the seasonal rains which begin during the early Spring season. Also, in the second line, you nicely bring in the mid to late Spring heat. Enjoyed your well-crafted poem.