Spring

Spring flowers in bloom A light breeze from the mountains Southern birds return

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2010 8:30:00 AM

You have such a way with haikus. Nice.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/6/2010 7:49:00 AM

Wonderful imagery in this haiku, Gert. The birds have been vacating Florida and heading back to Northern states. Growing up in NJ, it was always a delight to watch the migration of geese. Thanks for recalling these memories! Love, Carolyn

Nick Bagnall

Date: 4/6/2010 5:49:00 AM

Nicely done, good imagery, I'm probably overstepping the mark here, please take it as constructive. Try to stick to 5-7-5, dropping the 'and' seems to work. 'nice' is an un-interesting word something like warm , cool, fresh would work well. P.S Loved the last line, there is something just right about it - Nick

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/6/2010 3:40:00 AM

Great write in a short form that brings pictures to the mind..Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara