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Romans 8:37 _ Yet in all these things we are more than conquerors and gain an overwhelming victory through Him who loved us [so much that He died for us]. spring rains, thunderstorms water, nitrogen come to earth.... three ripe tomatoes food for the body food for the soul.... sustain and grow

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2025 11:17:00 PM

A modern ku and a traditional one very nice.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/28/2025 4:00:00 AM

Thank you for noticing, Andrea. Your visit is encouraging. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/27/2025 8:16:00 AM

Seems the rain has now stopped and spring in full swing. Delicious tomatoes and now even figs.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/27/2025 1:53:00 PM

Pouring here right now Victor. We won't have figs here though until closer to fall. I like figs straight from the tree(bush). Sara K

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/27/2025 8:07:00 AM

wonderful harmony for the readers and loving ones merci

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/27/2025 1:52:00 PM

Why, merci', Yann. I appreciate the visit and kind words. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/27/2025 7:31:00 AM

- We've had our share of rain and thunder this month... everything planted outside is lying flat, sticking to the ground... no tomatoes :))) - A lovely poem, Sara :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/27/2025 1:50:00 PM

Anne-Lise, I would guess it is just a little too early for those tomatoes where you live unless hothouse grown. Thanks for dropping by and all the smiley faces. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/27/2025 6:59:00 AM

Great poem, Dear Sara, Nature, sustenance, and individual development are at the heart of your poem's main theme. Rain and storms, representing both material and immaterial nutrition, are presented as crucial elements to the development of food.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/27/2025 1:49:00 PM

Thank you, Lasaad. Without nature we couldn't do what is needed to be done but sometimes nature comes on too strong. We're in the middle of a storm now and I hope it doesn't get worse. Sara K