Spring

water rejoices

gurgles splashes meanders –

freedom at its source


parched soil drinks essence

smacks lips soaks up swells fortune – 

intimate delight


drought drowns in rock pools

recites sun baked final wish –

happy with fusion 


20th April 2021

Spring Haiku Chain Contest

Sponsor M. L. Kiser
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Ligon Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 3:05 PM
Nice personification and sense of movement and desire fulfilled. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 2:30 PM
I like the personification in this set. Congrats to you.
Merryman Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 6:56 PM
Kai, congrats on your win with your Spring haiku! Blessings, Kim M
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