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water rejoices gurgles splashes meanders – freedom at its source parched soil drinks essence smacks lips soaks up swells fortune – intimate delight drought drowns in rock pools recites sun baked final wish – happy with fusion 20th April 2021 Spring Haiku Chain Contest Sponsor M. L. Kiser

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Date: 4/27/2021 3:05:00 PM
Nice personification and sense of movement and desire fulfilled. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/27/2021 2:30:00 PM
I like the personification in this set. Congrats to you.
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Date: 4/26/2021 6:56:00 PM
Kai, congrats on your win with your Spring haiku! Blessings, Kim M
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